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November 2015
[edit]This page is badly out of date and potentially misleading. We have written some new content as objectively as we can but we're not sure if it's acceptable to edit the page ourselves (or to create a new one)? MAS (talk) 16:59, 2 November 2015 (UTC)
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COI: I am an employee of the Money Advice Service.
Existing page entirely out of date and potentially misleading to consumers. Propose delete in entirety. Proposed replacement text as below. MASMBS (talk) 14:56, 3 November 2015 (UTC)
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Introduction[edit]The Money Advice Service is a UK-wide organisation dedicated to helping people manage their money better. It can be contacted via its website www.moneyadviceservice.org.uk or by telephone on 0300 500 5000.
Financial Capability Strategy for the UK[edit]The Financial Capability Strategy for the UK aims to help people manage their money better day to day and through major life events, and to deal with periods of financial difficulty. Money advice[edit]In line with its statutory function (see below) the Service provides information and advice to consumers across a wide range of money matters. The Money Advice Service is available online at www.moneyadviceservice.org.uk and six days a week by webchat and telephone.[2] The telephone number for the Service is 0300 500 5000. The Service can also be contacted by email at enquiries@moneyadviceservice.org.uk.
The Money Advice Service makes its tools and content freely available to partner organisations for use on their own websites and in other customer communications.[3] Debt advice[edit]The Money Advice Service is the largest single funder of debt advice in the UK. In 2015/16 it will – through its partners – aim to deliver 370,000 sessions of free debt advice. References
Background and statutory basis[edit]The Money Advice Service was set up to help tackle low levels of financial capability in the UK. In 2007, the then Economic Secretary to the Treasury, Ed Balls, commissioned the Thoresen Review of Generic Financial Advice (published in March 2008) which found that a national service to provide ‘money guidance’ would be beneficial.
References Funding[edit]The Money Advice Service is funded by two separate levies on the financial services industry – one covering the Service’s debt advice activities, the other for its wider money advice and financial capability initiatives. These levies are collected from firms by the Financial Conduct Authority (FCA). Farnish Review[edit]The legislation establishing the Money Advice Service included provision for a review of its operation. In May 2014 then Economic Secretary to the Treasury, Andrea Leadsom appointed Christine Farnish to conduct an independent review of the Service. Her report was published by the Treasury on 20 March 2015, containing 25 specific recommendations on how the Money Advice Service could improve. Money Advice Service response[edit]In its immediate response to the Farnish Review, the Money Advice Service accepted most of the recommendations made and indicated that these were in alignment with the Service’s existing direction of travel. Financial Advice Market Review and Public Financial Guidance consultation[edit]On 3 August 2015, HM Treasury and the FCA announced a new Financial Advice Market Review (FAMR), to be led by the FCA, with HM Treasury leading on a consultation on the provision of public financial guidance to run alongside. The consultation will look at:
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- The proposed draft has issues with some promotional wordings (e.g. "dedicated to helping people manage their money better", also telephone numbers typically are not included in Wikipedia articles), and also needs more in-line citations to support the claims made in the article. We would like to help correct any details that are out-of-date, but it would be better to highlight specifically what is outdated and propose separate changes for each inaccuracy. Thanks, Altamel (talk) 21:00, 9 March 2016 (UTC)
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New organisation name
[edit]This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. The requested text's references are not formatted according to the citation style predominantly in use with the subject article (WP:CITEVAR). Any additions made to the article should have references formatted according to the style already in use with the article. Please see the Reply section below for more information about this issue. |
Please can the page be edited to reflect the fact that the Money Advice Service has now been succeeded by a new organisation, the Money and Pensions Service?
For reference, existing article opening sentence: The Money Advice Service is an organisation established with cross Government party support, that provides free and impartial advice on money and financial decisions to people in the United Kingdom.
The suggested changes are: - Replace references to "Money Advice Service" in the title, opening paragraph and paragraph 2 to read "Money and Pensions Service" [1] [2] [3]
- Add at the foot of the article: In January 2019, The Single Financial Guidance Body replaced the Money Advice Service, the Pensions Advisory Service and Pension Wise. The new organisation's remit was to provide debt advice, money guidance and pension guidance in the same place. [4]
The launch of the Money and Pensions Service brand took place in April 2019, replacing The Single Financial Guidance Body following parliamentary approval of the new name. Its first action will be a UK-wide series of events giving organisations and businesses the chance to help shape the Money and Pensions Service National Strategy and establish the three-year corporate plan, which is to be announced later in 2019. [5] — Preceding unsigned comment added by 85.184.195.130 (talk) 14:34, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
References
- ^ https://www.moneyadviceservice.org.uk/blog/Introducing-the-money-and-pensions-service
- ^ http://www.legislation.gov.uk/uksi/2019/383/pdfs/uksi_20190383_en.pdf
- ^ https://www.ftadviser.com/your-industry/2019/03/04/government-finally-stops-calling-guidance-advice
- ^ https://www.gov.uk/government/organisations/single-financial-guidance-body
- ^ https://moneyandpensionsservice.org.uk/
Reply 11-APR-2019
[edit]- Your edit request could not be reviewed because the provided references are not formatted correctly.[a] The citation style predominantly used by the Money Advice Service article is Citation Style 1 (CS1). The citation style used in the edit request consists of bare URL's.[b] Any requested edit of yours which may be implemented will need to resemble the current style already in use in the article – in this case, CS1. (See WP:CITEVAR.) In the extended section below titled Citation style, I have illustrated two examples: one showing how the edit request was submitted, and another showing how requests should be submitted in the future:
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In the example above there are three URL's provided with the claim statements, but these URL's have not been placed using Citation Style 1, which is the style predominantly used by the Money Advice Service article. Using this style, the WikiFormatted text should resemble the following:
In the example above the references have been formatted according to Citation Style 1, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc., all information which is lost when only the links are provided. As Wikipedia is a volunteer project, edit requests such yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review. |
Kindly rewrite your edit request so that it aligns more with the second example shown in the collapsed section above, and feel free to re-submit that edit request at your earliest convenience. The IP editor is also asked to remember:
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If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards, Spintendo 14:51, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
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- ^ The use of bare URLs as references is a style which is acceptable for use in Wikipedia. However, general practice dictates that the style already in use for an article be the one that is subsequently used for all future additions unless changed by editorial consensus.[1]
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Guideline: It is normal practice to defer to the style used by the first major contributor or adopted by the consensus of editors already working on the page, unless a change in consensus has been achieved. If the article you are editing is already using a particular citation style, you should follow it.
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Thank you for your response. Updated citations can be found below.
Also, COI is that I work with the external press office for the Money and Pensions Service.
For reference, existing article opening sentence: The Money Advice Service is an organisation established with cross Government party support, that provides free and impartial advice on money and financial decisions to people in the United Kingdom.
The suggested changes are: - Replace references to "Money Advice Service" in the title, opening paragraph and paragraph 2 to read "Money and Pensions Service" [1][2]
- Add at the foot of the article: In January 2019, The Single Financial Guidance Body replaced the Money Advice Service, the Pensions Advisory Service and Pension Wise. The new organisation's remit was to provide debt advice, money guidance and pension guidance in the same place. [3]
The launch of the Money and Pensions Service brand took place in April 2019, replacing The Single Financial Guidance Body following parliamentary approval of the new name. Its first action will be a UK-wide series of events giving organisations and businesses the chance to help shape the Money and Pensions Service National Strategy and establish the three-year corporate plan, which is to be announced later in 2019. [4] [5]
85.184.195.130 (talk) 08:56, 12 April 2019 (UTC)DanDJThompson85.184.195.130 (talk) 08:56, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
References
- ^ Burns, Charlotte (2019-04-08). "Introducing the Money and Pensions Service". The Money Advice Service. Retrieved 2019-04-12.
- ^ "The Financial Guidance and Claims Act 2018 (Naming and Consequential Amendments) Regulations 2019" (PDF). Department for Work and Pensions. Retrieved 2019-04-12.
- ^ "Single Financial Guidance Body". Gov.UK. Retrieved 2019-04-12.
- ^ "Introducing the Money and Pensions Service". Retrieved 2019-04-12.
- ^ Espadinha, Maria (2019-03-20). "Advisers asked for input on guidance body strategy". FT Adviser. Retrieved 2019-04-12.
The proposal is to change the article's name to the Money and Pensions Service, with the claim in the 3rd sentence stating that this is the successor organization to the Money Advice Service. Then, the fourth sentence states "The Single Financial Guidance Body replaced the Money Advice Service"
. The 6th paragraph goes on to state "Money and Pensions Service brand took place in April 2019, replacing the Single Financial Guidance Body."
There seems to be some difficulty settling on a name for this organization. If the name is changed now, are we to be sure it won't change again, or is there a newer name coming next month. Please clarify, is this to change the article's title? The reason why I ask is because sometimes titles are changed after a period of time has elapsed where a majority of sources are using the new name. Again, please confirm if this is to change the title. When ready to proceed with the requested information, kindly change the {{request edit}}
template's answer parameter to read from |ans=yes
to |ans=no
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Spintendo 10:22, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
The Single Financial Guidance Body was a temporary name, in place only until the new name, Money and Pensions Service, received parliamentary approval. Now this has happened, we can be confident in changing the article title. Thank you. 85.184.195.130 (talk) 10:29, 15 April 2019 (UTC)DanDJThompson85.184.195.130 (talk) 10:29, 15 April 2019 (UTC)
Reply 15-APR-2019
[edit]Edit request implemented Spintendo 15:13, 15 April 2019 (UTC)
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COI is that I work with the external press office for the Money and Pensions Service.
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Hello, would recommend further edits to this page for clarity and accuracy. This gives further information on the Chair, CEO, more accurately reflects the organisation's history beyond just being a successor to the Money Advice Service as Pension Wise and TPAS were also predecessors. Also added citations and infobox, as articles for equivalent organisations such as StepChange have this to help readers:
The Money and Pensions Service (sometimes stylized as Money & Pensions Service) is an organisation that provides free advice on money, pensions and financial decisions to people in the United Kingdom. It is an organisation whose statutory objectives are to enhance the understanding and knowledge of people about financial matters (including the UK financial system) and to enhance their ability to manage their own financial affairs. The service provides free money guidance and debt advice online and by telephone. The organisation was set up by the UK Government and is paid for by a statutory levy on the financial services industry [1]. It is an arm’s-length body, sponsored by the Department for Work and Pensions, with a joint commitment to ensuring that people throughout the UK have guidance and access to the information they need to make effective financial decisions over their lifetime. Its current chair is Sir Hector Sants [2] and the CEO is John Govett [3].
The service was launched in January 2019, combining the Money Advice Service, The Pensions Advisory Service and Pension Wise to form a single guidance body [4]. The decision to merge the organisations into one new body was originally announced in March 2016 by HM Treasury and confirmed in The Queen’s Speech of June 2017 [5][6].
The Money and Pensions Service is set to launch its National Strategy and three-year corporate plan in Autumn 2019, following three months of events that seek the views of stakeholders on what should be included in the new strategy [7][8]. References
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85.184.195.130 (talk)DanDJThompson85.184.195.130 (talk)
Reply 04-JUN-2019
[edit]- The proposal contains claims regarding the company's internal operating schema, i.e., its objectives (
"It is an organisation whose statutory objectives are to enhance the understanding and knowledge of people about financial matters (including the UK financial system) and to enhance their ability to manage their own financial affairs"
). These claims are placed in the lead section without references. - Claims placed in the MOS:LEAD section without references are to be referenced later on in the main prose of the article. This is not the case with the COI editor's current proposal.
- Additionally, a claim regarding WP:FUTURE events has been placed in the proposal.
- For these reasons the proposed edits cannot be approved in their entirety.
Regards, Spintendo 02:20, 5 June 2019 (UTC)
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Thanks – have added page references here and reopened edit request
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The Money and Pensions Service (sometimes stylized as Money & Pensions Service) is an organisation that provides free advice on money, pensions and financial decisions to people in the United Kingdom. It is an organisation whose statutory objectives are to enhance the understanding and knowledge of people about financial matters (including the UK financial system) and to enhance their ability to manage their own financial affairs [1] [2]. The service provides free money guidance and debt advice online and by telephone. The organisation was set up by the UK Government and is paid for by a statutory levy on the financial services industry [3]. It is an arm’s-length body, sponsored by the Department for Work and Pensions, with a joint commitment to ensuring that people throughout the UK have guidance and access to the information they need to make effective financial decisions over their lifetime. Its current chair is Sir Hector Sants [4] and the CEO is John Govett [5].
The service was launched in January 2019, combining the Money Advice Service, The Pensions Advisory Service and Pension Wise to form a single guidance body [6]. The decision to merge the organisations into one new body was originally announced in March 2016 by HM Treasury and confirmed in The Queen’s Speech of June 2017 [7] [8].
The Money and Pensions Service is currently undertaking three months of events that seek the views of stakeholders on what should be included in its National Strategy and three-year corporate plan [9] [10]. References
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85.184.195.130 (talk)DanDJThompson85.184.195.130 (talk)
Reply 19-JUN-2019
[edit]- The added references solve the citation issue, but they raise an additional one:
- Two of the provided references (#1 and #3) do not contain
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parameter information within their citation templates. - One of these references is a document 136 pages in length, whilst the second reference contains 46 pages. The reviewer cannot be expected to read 182 pages in order to verify 2 claims.
- Please provide this information.
Regards, Spintendo 13:08, 19 June 2019 (UTC)
- I apologize but I'm not seeing the claim
It is an organisation whose statutory objectives are to enhance the understanding and knowledge of people about financial matters (including the UK financial system) and to enhance their ability to manage their own financial affairs
anywhere in the provided document. I've checked page 8 of the document and pdf page 8 (which is page 4 of the document) and I'm not seeing those claims. Please activate the|quote=
parameter of the citation template and insert the quoted text from the source. The same goes for reference #3 which is on page 6 (document and pdf pages align with this document). Please add the quote from this text which confirms the claimsThe service provides free money guidance and debt advice online and by telephone. The organisation was set up by the UK Government and is paid for by a statutory levy on the financial services industry.
- Regards, Spintendo 18:06, 20 June 2019 (UTC)
Thanks – have added clearer citations that do not rely on long documents, which should make this easier. Have also updated the CEO title to reflect a change of staff and cited:
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- Money and Pensions Service
Predecessor | Money Advice Service, Pensions Advisory Service, Pension Wise |
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Founded | 2019 |
Focus | Everyone making the most of their money and pensions |
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Area served | United Kingdom |
Services | Debt advice and support |
Website | moneyandpensionsservice |
The Money and Pensions Service (sometimes stylized as Money & Pensions Service) is an organisation that provides free advice on money, pensions and financial decisions to people in the United Kingdom. It is an organisation whose statutory objective is to develop and co-ordinate a national strategy to improve people’s financial capability [1] [2]. The service provides free money guidance and debt advice online and by telephone. The organisation was set up by the UK Government and is paid for by a statutory levy on the financial services industry [3]. It is an arm’s-length body, sponsored by the Department for Work and Pensions, with a joint commitment to ensuring that people throughout the UK have guidance and access to the information they need to make effective financial decisions over their lifetime.
Its current chair is Sir Hector Sants [4] and the acting CEO is Caroline Siarkiewicz [5].
- History
The service was launched in January 2019, combining the Money Advice Service, The Pensions Advisory Service and Pension Wise to form a single guidance body [6]. The decision to merge the organisations into one new body was originally announced in March 2016 by HM Treasury and confirmed in The Queen’s Speech of June 2017 [7] [8].
- National strategy
The Money and Pensions Service is currently undertaking three months of events that seek the views of stakeholders on what should be included in its National Strategy and three-year corporate plan [9] [10].
85.184.195.130 (talk)Dan DJ Thompson85.184.195.130 (talk)
References
- ^ Glen, John (19 June 2019). Breathing Space Scheme (Speech). House of Commons: They Work For You. Retrieved 21 June 2019.
- ^ "New five-year strategy to greater target those most in need of debt advice". Money Advice Service.
- ^ Addison, Rachel (10 April 2019). "Industry to pay £36.9m for pension guidance". FT Adviser. Retrieved 21 June 2019.
- ^ Hosking, Patrick (20 May 2019). "Hector Sants on mission to cure financial misery". The Times. Retrieved 29 May 2019.
- ^ Roach, Holly (11 June 2019). "Money and Pensions Service CEO John Govett resigns". Professional Pensions. Retrieved 21 June 2019.
- ^ "Home". The Money and Pensions Service.
- ^ Milligan, Brian (16 March 2016). "Budget 2016: Money Advice Service to be abolished". BBC News. Retrieved 29 May 2019.
- ^ Murray-West, Rosie (21 June 2017). "New pensions minister to merge guidance bodies". FT Adviser. Retrieved 29 May 2019.
- ^ "Home". The Money and Pensions Service.
- ^ Andrew, Theo (3 April 2019). "Money and Pensions Service to be 'heart' of improving nation's financial wellbeing - Sants". Pensions Age. Retrieved 29 May 2019.
Reply 27-JUN-2019
[edit]- Thank you for providing the better sources. That is much appreciated.
- Unfortunately, the proposal still contains unreferenced information[a] (underlined in blue) as well as claims which do not align with MOS:RELTIME (underlined in orange). These issues are preventing the edits from being implemented as a whole.[b][c]
The Money and Pensions Service (sometimes stylized as Money & Pensions Service) is an organisation that provides free advice on money, pensions and financial decisions to people in the United Kingdom. It is an organisation whose statutory objective is to develop and co-ordinate a national strategy to improve people’s financial capability. The service provides free money guidance and debt advice online and by telephone. The organisation was set up by the UK Government and is paid for by a statutory levy on the financial services industry. It is an arm’s-length body, sponsored by the Department for Work and Pensions, with a joint commitment to ensuring that people throughout the UK have guidance and access to the information they need to make effective financial decisions over their lifetime. Its current chair is Sir Hector Sants and the acting CEO is Caroline Siarkiewicz. The service was launched in January 2019, combining the Money Advice Service, The Pensions Advisory Service and Pension Wise to form a single guidance body. The decision to merge the organisations into one new body was originally announced in March 2016 by HM Treasury and confirmed in The Queen’s Speech of June 2017. The Money and Pensions Service is currently undertaking three months of events that seek the views of stakeholders on what should be included in its National Strategy and three-year corporate plan.
Regards, Spintendo 06:24, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
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- ^ If this information is mentioned and referenced elsewhere in the article, the reference should be provided here in the edit request.
- ^ Approvable portions may be implemented upon request.
- ^ Furthermore, the underlined sentence in blue states that the service is "sponsored by the Department for Work and Pensions" yet the previous sentence states that the service "is paid for by a statutory levy on the financial services industry". These two claims appear to indicate that funding comes from two different sources. Also, the term "arms-length body" is not defined.
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Have added further sources, linked to an article that explains an arm’s-length body (have stuck with this term though the article links to the Wikipedia page links to Quango as the terms are synonymous, but arm’s-length body is easier to understand for the layperson. Have specified the timeframe for the listening period to align with MOS:RELTIME. Thanks
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The Money and Pensions Service (sometimes stylized as Money & Pensions Service) is an organisation that provides free advice on money, pensions and financial decisions to people in the United Kingdom. It is an organisation whose statutory objective is to develop and co-ordinate a national strategy to improve people’s financial capability [1] [2]. The service provides free money guidance and debt advice online and by telephone. The organisation was set up by the UK Government and is paid for by a statutory levy on the financial services industry [3]. It is an arm’s-length body of the Department for Work and Pensions, with a joint commitment to ensuring that people throughout the UK have guidance and access to the information they need to make effective financial decisions over their lifetime[4][5]. Its current chair is Sir Hector Sants[6] and the acting CEO is Caroline Siarkiewicz [7].
The service was launched in January 2019, combining the Money Advice Service, The Pensions Advisory Service and Pension Wise to form a single guidance body [8]. The decision to merge the organisations into one new body was originally announced in March 2016 by HM Treasury and confirmed in The Queen’s Speech of June 2017 [9] [10].
Between April and September 2019, The Money and Pensions Service is undertaking events that seek the views of stakeholders on what should be included in its National Strategy and three-year corporate plan [11] [12]. References
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85.184.195.130 (talk)DanDJThompson85.184.195.130 (talk)
Reply 03-JUL-2019
[edit]Edit request partially implemented Spintendo 20:39, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
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