Talk:Monday (The X-Files)/GA1

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Reviewer: DAP388 (talk · contribs) 20:44, 2 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Will review the article tomorrow. —DAP388 (talk) 20:44, 2 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Just a few comments:

"'Monday' earned a Nielsen household rating of 10.2 and was watched by 16.7 million people in its initial broadcast." The flow is a bit choppy here. Put the number in front of Nielsen.
"In this episode, the world is trapped in a time loop, and only one woman seems to know." Who is this woman? If possibly please specify her name.
"Mulder's paycheck and envelope were created after several calls to the J. Edgar Hoover Building." Specify Washington, D.C. as its location.
Season Six -> season six. Wikilink the show's sixth season to it as well.

That's it. On hold for seven days. —DAP388 (talk) 18:20, 3 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Alrighty, I believed I've addressed all the issues.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:33, 3 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. I will now pass the article. —DAP388 (talk) 18:37, 3 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]