Talk:Moments (One Direction song)/GA3

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 22:32, 1 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for reviewing. — Robin (talk) 22:47, 1 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Info box

Use Hubert's full name in the Producer parameter
Add the previous and next song to the infobox, like on "Homeless" for example.

Lead

You don't need to say it's from the deluxe edition
"The track was not commissioned as a single." → Remove. You don't need to say something if it didn't happen. It's like saying that the song didn't chart in America.
"Upon the release of Up All Night, the song charted in lower regions on the singles charts in Australia, Canada, and the United Kingdom." → Add somewhere in the sentence that it chart in tese countries due to strong digital download sales. And link digital download.

Background and composition

Spilt these. They can have their own sections. Then name the Composition section Composition and lyrics.
"In a November 2012 interview with MTV News" → In an interview with MTV News in November 2012,

Reception

Rename to Critical reception
I don't see why Sheeran's opinion is in a box quote? Not really sure if it is relevant information to be honest, I don't see how it fits in the article.
"whom highlighted its" → whom praised its
Unitalicise the lyrics.

Live performance

"A live performance of the song is featured on the DVD release of the tour." → The song was later included on the DVD release, One Direction: Up All Night – The Live Tour.

Tracklist

Remove this section altogether. I notice this was raised in GA/1

Charts

One table for 2011, one table for 2012, like on "I Got You" for example.

References

FN1: Link Hearst Corporation
FN2: Link The Sun
FN4: Link Daily Mail

Go through and check that Capital FM, Roling Stone etc are linked and that MTV is not italicised. On hold. AARON• ^TALK 23:00, 1 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Did everything. — Robin (talk) 03:43, 2 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Passing. AARON• ^TALK 09:53, 2 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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