Talk:Moments (One Direction song)/GA2

GA Reassessment

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Reassessor: Till (talk · contribs)

How this was passed as a Good article is something beyond me.

Issues

Infobox—source for songwriter is not needed.
Lead—the article is too short to contain 2 paragraphs for the lead.
taken from the deluxe edition of their debut studio album Up All Night. --> Year?
The song received positive reviews from music critics, praising the song's memorability and compositional structure. --> Past tense to present?
Background—In an interview, Sheeran talking about the song, stated, --> Huh? This doesn't make sense. And anyways, what interview?
Composition and critical reception—these two sections don't go well together.
According to the sheet music published by EMI Music Publishing --> Unnecessary
Written in the key of D major; vocal elements range from the note of D4 to A5. --> Awkward prose
"Moments" is a pop ballad --> Should be stated earlier in the article
What the f*ck makes the 'Sugarscape' and 'Pop & Glory' sources reliable?
Charts—add 'sortable'
Two pictures is a little much for such a short article.
References—every 'work' paramater that isn't a printed source should not be in italics. There's some over-linking going on (e.g. Allmusic, Rovi)
This hardly feels like a GA. It's so short.

Overall

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Till 08:03, 3 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I notified the main contributer to the article 10 days ago and they have made no effort to address the issues. As such, I am delisting this as a GA. The article can be renominated any time but I would suggest that the above remaining issues are fixed. Till 00:33, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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