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Reviewer: —Andrewstalk 23:59, 22 July 2011 (UTC)
- One dablink found and fixed; please check
- Plot
- "Astrid Weller (played by Isabella Rossellini)" - wouldn't 'voiced' be more appropriate?
- "Homer's exhibit goes to the Louvre: American Style museum and when Mr. Burns buys his work. " - huh?
- "Consequently, Homer becomes a success" - is this really needed?
- "Arrivederci Roma" - per MoS, should be in quote marks, not italics
- "On the Simpsons' garage door, "Start here tomorrow 7/17/95" is written in blue paint. The date refers to Scully and Julie Thacker's anniversary, which was on July 17, 1995" - how is this relevant to the episode?
- It is only mentioned in this episode. Perhaps it would fit better in Cultural references?
- Oh. Then stipulate that the writing was only on the garage in this episode. —Andrewstalk 09:35, 23 July 2011 (UTC)
- Steven Dean Moore's participation in the DVD commentary is not supported by ref.
- The DVD Town ref should link the page 2, where this episode's comment is, and indicate
page=2
in the citation template.
Nice work, on hold, awaiting improvements. —Andrewstalk 00:34, 23 July 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! I've answered most of your concerns, and there was only one that I was a bit unsure about. Thanks again! Queenieacoustic (talk) 09:28, 23 July 2011 (UTC)
- All good, passing now. Congratulations and keep up the good work! —Andrewstalk 09:55, 23 July 2011 (UTC)