Talk:Mohawk Ambulance Service

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" self-proclaimed largest privately-owned ambulance service"

Can we get rid of "self proclaimed" somehow? I copy-edit frequently, and I'd fix this one, but I'm not sure if the author wrote it like that because there's some dispute between the factual and their claims, or if it was supposed to be stylistic? Please fix that, though. It seems very... aloof? Almost like someone who wrote the article is irritated by the fact that they're a "self-proclaimed largest privately-owned ambulance service." It just doesn't give off the right tone to me -- unless there honestly is a cite-able source where they claimed to be the largest service and there's factual evidence that they're not. ɯɐɔ 💬 03:34, 6 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]