Talk:Mitsu Dan

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Did you know... that Japanese erotic film star Mitsu Dan writes fiction for literary magazines?

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Date of birth

Bakazaka, her date of birth is mentioned in the lead (is it referenced?) but just her year of birth in the infobox, needs to be consistent. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:52, 1 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Probably best to put year only in the lead. Birth year is mentioned in several of her bios in the article's linked sources. Bakazaka (talk) 18:25, 1 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

One sentence is not sufficient to adequately summarise the key points of this article. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:50, 1 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Can you be more specific about which key points are not adequately summarized? Bakazaka (talk) 19:00, 1 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

What actually makes her notable, for instance. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:02, 1 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: So, for example, "She has played multiple lead roles in television and film, including Naoko in the 2013 erotic thriller Amai Muchi, for which she received a Newcomer Prize at the 37th Japan Academy Prize ceremony." Something like that? Bakazaka (talk) 19:08, 1 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Bingo! The Rambling Man (talk) 19:09, 1 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Done. Thanks for the help. Bakazaka (talk) 19:21, 1 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

No worries, thanks for your nice article and good edits. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:24, 1 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]