Talk:Mississippi Highway 612/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cameron11598 (talk · contribs) 23:40, 3 January 2017 (UTC)

• Will start shortly --Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:40, 3 January 2017 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

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Good work just a few minor things to correct.

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   See comments

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   are there any images available that would improve the article?

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   Good luck improving the article!

Comments

• The start of the route description section could be worded better to make the topic clearer.
• "At Red Creek Church Road, MS 612 travels southeast and into a larger forest"
  • Not sure you need the "and"
• "small forest" "larger forest" (in the route description section)
  • Which forests?
• History Section
  • MS 612 was established in 1966, and it was part of a construction project in 1967, with a total cost of $611,248
    • Almost seems like a run-on sentence could probably be separated for better flow.
  • The route has not been changed significantly since.[9][10]
    • Sentence Fragment

--Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 00:05, 4 January 2017 (UTC)

Fixed all of them I think. The forest doesn't have a name. It's just a group of trees.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 23:52, 4 January 2017 (UTC)

Looks good! --Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:54, 4 January 2017 (UTC)