Talk:Missing You (The Saturdays song)/GA1

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Reviewer: - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:54, 4 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead:

"Missing You" is a song performed by British girl group The Saturdays taken from their first mini album, Headlines!." Add a comma after; The Saturdays,
"The lyrics centre around being in a relation ship with the passion has gone but still being addicted to the love that used to be." i would re-write to "[...] around being in a relationship where the passion has left, but still being addicted to the love that used to exist.
"It features an electropop production which incorporates elements of trance and synthpop. rewrite to say "It features an electropop production ~~which~~ incorporating elements of trance and synthpop.
"However critics gave the song mostly negative reviews, criticising the decision to release it as a single, for using auto-tuned vocals and described the song's production as lacking in energy." Rewrite, do not start a sentence with However, however is a continuation of a previous sentence, there is no sentence before it. Needs a new opening.
"An accompanying music video was features scenes of the group dancing on a beach in Málaga, Spain" Huh? lol.

Please address these and i will do a more thorough review when i wake up as its 10pm and im tired. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:54, 4 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Issues addressed. -- Lil_℧niquℇ №1 | talk2me 21:35, 11 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]