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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 20:35, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


I'll be taking a look at this! — GhostRiver 20:35, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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Infobox and lede

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  • No comma needed after "American singer-songwriter Ingrid Michaelson"
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:31, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:31, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "and was produced by the latter"
Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:31, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:31, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "which features" → "featuring"
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:31, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Background and writing

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  • "while de Jong producing the track" → "with de Jong producing the track"
Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "either a scene or theme" → "either a scene or a theme"
Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • No comma needed after "theme from Stranger Things"
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "she believes" → "that she believed"
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "is relatable to several listeners" → "is widely relatable"
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Music and lyrics

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  • ""grainy bassline."" → ""grainy bassline"." per MOS:LQ
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:53, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "C Major" → "C major"
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:53, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Stranger Thing's" → "Stranger Things'"
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:53, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Italicize Popdust
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:53, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comma after "sings the lyrics"
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:53, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • ""Missing You"'s lyrical content" → "the lyrical content of "Missing You""
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:53, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add spaces for all of the / line breaks in the last line of the second paragraph
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:53, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

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  • Include a topic sentence such as: ""Missing You" received positive reviews from music critics."
Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:45, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Idolator should be italicized, as it's the name of a publication
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:45, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ditto with Popdust
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:45, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Move the last sentence, which talks about commercial reception, to a new paragraph
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:45, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • That's also where you'll put the chart that I mentioned down below
Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 18:47, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Music videos and live performances

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  • "A lyric video inspired by the video game Pac-Man was released on May 10, 2019, the same day as the single." → "The single's release on May 10, 2019, was accompanied by a lyric video inspired by the video game Pac-Man."
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:03, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "An official music video was released on July 10, 2019, which was directed by Daniel Carberry. Michaelson premiered the music video on Today. The entire video was filmed in one take." → "An official music video was released on July 10, 2019, premiering on Today. Directed by Daniel Carberry, the entire video was filmed in one take."
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:03, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • I would include that Kevin Wada is most known for his work as a comic book artist
Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:03, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The main character's gender ambiguous" → "The main character is of ambiguous gender"
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:03, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The references included in the last line are not very reliable (and one of them is now broken). Try a tour review, like this
Okay, sources replaced.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:03, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

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  • References [4] and [44] are the same
Fixed. Removed duplicate.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:16, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • References [28] and [31] are the same
Duplicate removed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:08, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • References [32] and [38] are the same
Fixed. removed duplicate.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:08, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • References [33] and [47] are the same
Fixed. Removed duplicate.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:16, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

General comments

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  • Infobox photo meets NFCC criteria
  • No stability issues
  • Underneath the music video section, there should be a section for Credits and personnel – see "Willow" and "RoboCop" for examples
There is very limited information online pertaining to the song's credits, but I've added what is available in reputable sources.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:51, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Underneath that should be a list of charts: I see that "Missing You" was on Billboard's Adult Top 40 Airplay chart. This should also be worked into the prose
Fixed/added.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:51, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Putting on hold to address comments. Ping me if there are any questions. — GhostRiver 16:26, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ghost Hi there, thank you so much for taking the time to review! I'm actually out of town for a few days without access to my own computer but I'll begin addressing your points as soon as I've returned home (should be within a week). Hope you don't mind!--Changedforbetter (talk) 16:52, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Changedforbetter Thank you for letting me know! I'll hold the nomination open until you're ready. :) — GhostRiver 16:53, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
GhostThank you for your patience! I've addressed/responded to all concerns; awaiting final verdict.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:54, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Changedforbetter I made a couple last tweaks myself, but otherwise good to go! — GhostRiver 22:28, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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