Talk:Mirai no Museum/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 09:06, 4 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Address the dead links
which features instrumentation of -- which features instrumentation from
The track is translated to "Future Museum" --> this should be used in the first line itself, like "Mirai No Museum" (Eng: "Future Museum")...."
Perfume have performed the song through live performances throughout Japan. --> Perfume have performed the song in a number of live performances throughout Japan.
Albums name in the infobox should be Level3 and not LEVEL3
Remove the first para of Background section. It has nothing to do with this album or the song
Correct the composition part. It is not clear whether you are sometimes talking about the album and sometimes about the single
"breaks the musical delivery."[9] He labelled it the "one true issue on the album."[9] --> consecutive appearances of FN9 not needed, only one referencing at the end of the quote is enough. And the end-quote symbol should be inside the period.
Please correct the issue about the endquotes through out the article
and said it was "painfully out of place." --> and felt it was "painfully out of place."
which did not feature on the album ---> which was not feature on the album
FN 11, you do not need to specify Unknown author
The track also peaked at two on Japan's Hot 100 chart ---> The wikilink for Hot 100 should be Japan Hot 100
The song was certified gold by RIAJ for shipments of ---> The song was certified gold by the Recording Industry Association of Japan (RIAJ) for shipments of
on 27 February of that year ---> Which year?
"Mirai no Museum" was used as the ending theme song for the film Doraemon: Nobita no Himitsu Dogu Museum ---> Mention in the end which year the film came out to give perspective
performed the track through live performance --> remove live performance, redundant
premiered on Perfume's youtube channel --> premiered on Perfume's YouTube channel
It depicts Perfume inside a comic book-theme world, trying to defeat the heavily armored warrior from the comic world. They are accompanied by a mysterious mascot man, who trys to hide away from the warrior when it attacks.[26] The video is the groups twelfth highest viewed music video on Youtube as of April 2015. --> Rephrase and remove the part about 12th highest video, has no significance
Use en-dash in the credits section
Mention the length of the track list in the respective section
Use rowheader for the charts and the {{Certification Table Entry}} for the certification
Use rowheader for release history
The notes part is unreferenced.
Use en-dash in all the reference titles using a normal dash
Add catalogue no. for all the templates using {{cite AV media}}

On hold for seven days. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 14:59, 4 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@IndianBio: Done. Finished all adjustments, grammar, correcting, etc. above. GirlsAlouud (talk · contribs} 05:50, 5 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

You havent used scope="row" in the tables GirlsAlouud. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 05:52, 5 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@IndianBio: Oops, missed that. Fixed those on Charts and Release history, along with changing the Certification table. Not sure about the "Japan" layout on the Release table though.