Talk:Minor league football (gridiron)/GA1

GA Review

Unsuccessful. Sounder Bruce 20:43, 4 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: SounderBruce (talk · contribs) 20:43, 4 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Failed "good article" nomination

This article has failed its Good article nomination. This is how the article, as of August 4, 2022, compares against the six good article criteria:

1. Well written?: The writing is stilted and is in dire need of copyediting. From a quick read-through, passages like "can be trace back", "was actually regional league", "start attracting" all show a need for improvement.

2. Verifiable?: Many uncited paragraphs.

3. Broad in coverage?: Missing information on what markets are typical to minor leagues, where players usually originate from and their fates, etc.

4. Neutral point of view?: Unsure.

5. Stable?:

Pass

6. Images?: Highly lacking in images, of which there has to be some out there.

This article is clearly not ready for a GAN. Please look at other articles about minor league sports before attempting another shot at GAN.

When these issues are addressed, the article can be renominated. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to have it reassessed. Thank you for your work so far.— Sounder Bruce 20:43, 4 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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