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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 09:00, 2 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • You don't need to link "studio album"
  • It revolves → It lyrically revolves
  • and her album release party → and at her album release party

Infobox

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  • Less Issues Than Vogue here ;)

Release and composition

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  • Eric Dawkins, Eric Cire → Eric Dawkins and Eric Cire
  • You should mention the label for its promotional release
  • Again, don't link "studio album"
  • the first song on the album → the record's opener
  • The instrumental is provided by a "funky guitar line" → The song contains a "funky guitar line" in its instrumentation
  • Delenda Joseph of Uproxx → start a new sentence here without a semicolon (;)
  • Link "hip-hop"

Critical reception

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  • No issues here ;)

Music video and promotion

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  • for "Mindful" was released on March 10, 2017 through → replace "through" with "on"
  • More Issues Than Vogue; the other three are → More Issues Than Vogue along with

Track listing

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  • Flawless ;)

Credits and personnel

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  • Flawless ;)

Release history

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  • Flawless ;)

Other stuff

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Copy-violation

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References

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  • As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article

Outcome

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