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Archive 1

Wikification

This article is in dire need of wikification. There are some egregious errors in grammar and sentence structure, and some of the parts do not belong in an encyclopedia. I will try to modify it some when time permits.

Plagiarism

A large portion of this article was directly copied from a short biography. I deleted this part. Khartma1 (talk) 23:47, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

Issues

  • "By the time she graduated from high school, Bissell was the top graduate in her year in Iran." The given link is broken. Can anyone find a reliable source documenting this? Lots of internet sources (her biographies) have similar or identical statements, but can anyone find an authoritative, Iranian source proving she was at the top in her entire country, or even that Iran has such a ranking system for high-schoolers?
  • "They have shown non-tumorgenic (normal-like) mammary epithelial cells form monolayer spherical acini with hollow lumen and tumorgenic mammary epithelial cells form filled bowl irregular acini." Can anyone change this into more readable prose? I can't understand this, and such a technical sentence doesn't belong on a general-knowledge encyclopedia.

Thanks for your effort, Gdfusion (talk) 01:47, 22 June 2014 (UTC)

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