Talk:Mimis Papaioannou/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:09, 31 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 23:19, 25 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

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Lede

who played as a forward, mostly for AEK Athens and a later manager - something missing here. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:22, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Like what? BEN917 (talk) 12:07, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
A later manager? Presumably "later as a manager" or equivalent Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:45, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed! BEN917 (talk) 10:52, 31 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
His nickname was "The Vlach" ( - see WP:NICKNAMETHE). Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:22, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
What is the issue here? BEN917 (talk) 12:19, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry MOS:THENICKNAME. I dunno why WP doesn't redirect there. Basically the name shouldn't have a caps on "the". Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:44, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed! BEN917 (talk) 10:52, 31 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
His nickname was "The Vlach" (Greek: "ο Βλάχος"), due to his refugee origins. - huh? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:22, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed! BEN917 (talk) 12:09, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
entire career, - career is fine. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:22, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed! BEN917 (talk) 12:09, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
showing the prudence and integrity of his character - fluff. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:22, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed! BEN917 (talk) 12:09, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Link red card. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:22, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
How? BEN917 (talk) 12:10, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
red card Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:45, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed! BEN917 (talk) 10:52, 31 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Papaioannou was considered to be the greatest Greek footballer of his generation and one of the best Greek footballers of all time.^{[according to whom?]} Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:22, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed! BEN917 (talk) 12:10, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
He was chosen by the IFFHS - well, they are a statistics company, they don't really choose people. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:22, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed! BEN917 (talk) 12:10, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The lede doesn't really mention much about them. They were an international player, scored loads of goals. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:22, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed! BEN917 (talk) 12:10, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

General

Most of the honours section is uncited. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:15, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed! BEN917 (talk) 12:10, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The cites in Greek should be translated Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:15, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
How? BEN917 (talk) 12:11, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Part of the {{cite web}} template has a |trans-title for the English translation for foreign language sources Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:46, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed! BEN917 (talk) 10:53, 31 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The YouTube videos should say which publication made them Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:15, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed! BEN917 (talk) 12:18, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
At the end of the season, he emerged again as the league's top scorer with 23 goals. - uncited. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:15, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed! BEN917 (talk) 12:18, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Do we not have a single image of this person? As they have died, you could probably put in a non-free one Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:15, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I put one, I hope I made it right so it won't be removed afterwards. BEN917 (talk) 12:19, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Review meta comments

I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 23:19, 25 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.