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This article reads like an academic paper

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This article reads like an academic paper, but I am not sure how this issue could be fixed. The main problem might be excessive in-text citations to other sources, including parenthetical references. A better article would streamline the references and create a more coherent overview of the topic. 2601:647:5800:1A1F:443C:9603:3623:E956 (talk) 18:51, 27 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I removed some of the long paraphrasing sections as a start. The article will need to be expanded with more encyclopedic content though from diverse sources. 2601:647:5800:1A1F:443C:9603:3623:E956 (talk) 18:56, 27 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]