Talk:Mildred Lewis Rutherford/GA1

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Reviewer: TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs) 16:11, 28 June 2012 (UTC) I'll be doing this in short time, thanks! →TSU ^tp* 16:11, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay;

• She was a prolific writer of textbooks and other works, and was also known for her oratory, delivered while dressed as a southern belle - Sounds little odd, can you please re-phrase it?

• Reworded. LadyofShalott 01:47, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

• Mildred Rutherford was the daughter of Laura Cobb Rutherford (Howell and Thomas's sister) and Williams Rutherford, a professor of mathematics at the University of Georgia. - Please move this sentence to the line next to this: Rutherford was born July 16, 1851 in Athens, Georgia

• Done, if I understood correctly what you requested LadyofShalott 01:32, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

• Never mind, I have fixed it. →TSU ^tp* 01:35, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

• Lucy Cobb Institute. was founded Thomas R.R. Cobb, so merge the last line of Family background with that of this: ...and the lawyer Thomas R.R. Cobb, one of the founders of the University of Georgia School of Law...

• It's more comlicated (and interesting) than that, but done. LadyofShalott 02:05, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

• Lucy Cobb Institute has been linked many times. As it is already linked in the lead, no need of re-linking. 2 links (including the lead) are enough and others are overlinking so please remove them also.

• It was linked twice (unless you've already removed some of the links?) Anyway now it's only the lead mention that has a link. LadyofShalott 01:21, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

• Humm, it was linked 3 times. I have removed the 3rd :) →TSU ^tp* 01:25, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

• OK. LadyofShalott 01:32, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

• In 1927 Rutherford became gravely ill - please change the word "gravely"

• What is the objection? LadyofShalott 01:16, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

• The word sounds as if it were written in a book about her not in an encyclopedia. Little less neutral in short. →TSU ^tp* 01:20, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

• Changed to seriously. LadyofShalott 01:47, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

• Also, add WP:ALT to the image in the infobox.

• Added. LadyofShalott 01:55, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

That is it for now. Once the problems are solved, I'll have a close look at it again. Cheers! →TSU ^tp* 01:11, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

I think that's all of them. LadyofShalott 01:55, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

No wait, one more. LadyofShalott 01:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

Now I think that's all of them. LadyofShalott 02:05, 3 July 2012 (UTC)