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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 07:57, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Doesnt "free agent" a better word for "without a club"?
It's factually correct, I don't know why "free agent", which is more ambiguous, would be more suitable. C679 15:00, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the lead, information should be provided about his spell with Banik Ostrava.
The name of the club is already there. He didn't win any trophies, so a mention that he played there is probably all that is needed, unless you mean something more specific? C679 15:00, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • In which year did he marry?
Added. C679 15:00, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • If her wife is a renowed personality, then please mention so.
Not particularly. C679 15:00, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Do we know nothing about his parents?
Nothing is readily available. Even on his official webpage there is nothing about his personal background. C679 15:00, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • The section of Banik Ostrava is bit short. I think, it should be expanded.
Expanded. C679 15:00, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the infobox, we can see three youth clubs in which he played, but no information about them is provided in the text.
Added. C679 15:00, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Please mention the result of his debut match with Liverpool.
Added. C679 15:00, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
When? It was called the Premiership between 1993 and 2007 per our article on the topic. C679 15:00, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Why was he substituted off? Please mention only if he sustained an injury.
Tactical. C679 15:00, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • The last sentence of the second paragraph of the Liverpool section requires citation.
Added. C679 15:00, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

RRD13 (talk) 08:26, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Mention the comptetion in which he debuted against Blackburn.
Done. C679 22:10, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • You can put League Cup within brackets beside Carling Cup for the ease of comprehension.
Changed to simply "League Cup", no need for sponsor's name. C679 22:10, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Again, the comptetion should be metioned in which he scored against Sheffield United.
Why? I agree for the debut above, but I don't agree it's necessary to include the competition for every game. C679 22:10, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • For how many years contract did he sign for Lyon?
Added. Also corrected date. C679 22:10, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Again, please mention the comptetion in which he made his debut.
Done. C679 22:10, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "he appeared as a substitute"- it should be "he appeared as a 00th minute substitute for ABC player"
Featured articles such as Thierry Henry do not include this information. Can you explain what part of the Good article criteria call for it? C679 22:10, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "On 1 November, Baroš was arrested in France..." what is it doing in the Lyon section? It should be in the Personal life.
Done. C679 22:10, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • The timespan of the loan…
Added. C679 22:10, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

RRD13 (talk) 19:30, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • " Baroš played a significant role in the club winning the 2008 FA Cup."- I think it should be reworded.
To what? It makes a statement which is based on the next two sentences. C679 10:00, 12 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Ankaragucu"- the club should be appropriately linked.
Added. C679 10:00, 12 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Baroš spent some time out of the first team"- What do you mean by this?
Reworded. C679 10:00, 12 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Samsunspor"- the club should be appropriately linked.
Added. C679 10:00, 12 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "told by coach Fatih Terim"- it should be "told by then coach Fatih Terim"
Done. C679 10:00, 12 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Mention the competition in which he made his debut for Antalyaspor.
Added. C679 10:00, 12 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • The infobox says that he is a free agent, but this section does not say anything of his release from the club.
He signed a one year contract at the beginning of the 2013–14 season, referenced in the article. He is still listed at the club's website in their squad,[1] so I have re-added club info - and retained the squad navbox you mentioned below. C679 06:20, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Again, please mention in which competition he made his debut for the national team against Belgium.
Added. C679 10:00, 12 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Who was the other one to be shown red card?
Added. C679 10:00, 12 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • After UEFA 2004, information has been given about 2006 Fifa World Cup. But no information has been given about the matches played by him in 2005. I am emphasising on it because he scored 5 goals in 11 matches.
Added. C679 19:23, 14 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • What was the breach of discipline?
Added. C679 10:00, 12 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • The career statistics table is not correct. Please refer to the MOS.
Done. C679 10:00, 12 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

RRD13 (talk) 05:21, 12 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Here it says that Baros has scored 27 goals in 108 appearances for Liverpool. But the statistics table in the article shows one match less.
The lfthistory site includes a 2002 Community Shield match in a column entitled "other". Such matches are not included at the Wikipedia article. C679 06:20, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
The MOS clearly indicates a separate column for other matches. For example Chris Smith (footballer born 1981), Pablo Ibáñez etc. RRD13 (talk) 15:05, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think one match over the course of 21 seasons (including part seasons) justifies a separate column. The "MOS", as you call it, is a proposal and not officially sanctioned as far as I can tell. Is it worth putting in a new column with 20 zeros and a single "1", in your opinion? C679 15:29, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, for just one match entering an entire column is too much. I think you should insert that match in the cup matches with a note "Includes 1 match in the Community Shield" RRD13 (talk) 04:03, 14 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Added. C679 19:11, 14 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Why in the totals cell under "–" filled cells, some are filled with "–" and some with 0?
Removed the short dashes. The long dash represents no competition, e.g. League Cup does not exist in the countries he played in, other than France and England. In European competitions, the dash represents the club not being "in Europe" that season. C679 06:20, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Can you please tell me where does the statistics for youth teams of Czech Republic come from?
They are available online using fn115. Jeřábek's book also includes his appearance data for youth teams. I do not believe an inline citation is required in the infobox. C679 06:20, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • The "u" is in lower case.
You will have to be more specific. There are 932 instances of "u" in the current version of this article. C679 06:20, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
I mean the word "unattached" in the userbox. RRD13 (talk) 15:05, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
It has already been removed. C679 15:29, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • What is the Antalyaspor squad template doing in the article?
See above. C679 06:20, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Cant understand what you say. RRD13 (talk) 15:05, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
He signed a one year contract at the beginning of the 2013–14 season, referenced in the article. He is still listed at the club's website in their squad,[2] therefore the squad template should be in the article. C679 15:29, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

RRD13 (talk) 03:50, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@Royroydeb: Is there anything else? C679 17:17, 16 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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