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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:37, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • " Area C was" -> "It was..."
 Done
  • My personal aim, and a good check -> no references in the lead. That way you guarantee that everything you mention there has to be in the main body of the article and referenced there too.
 Done
  • I also think the lead could include some of the criticism/praise for it, and suspension because of Covid etc.
I added some information, not sure if enough. In case I can add more. --Ita140188 (talk) 08:31, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Area C gate in Porta Ticinese" why is Area C in italics in this caption?
 Done removed italics
  • The Background section could use an "as of" because of the time-sensitive nature of the data.
 Done
  • "among large European cities" what's the definition of "large"?
This just reports the study and the article discussing it. I am not sure if we should specify the exact methodology. In any case, I tried to make the information clearer. --Ita140188 (talk) 08:22, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • " Area C was introduced on 16 January 2012," vs "Area C was definitively approved as a permanent program on 27 March 2013" when did it actually start/enter law? Is it that the 16 January date was the start of the "18-month pilot program" and permanent approval came along before the 18 months was up?
 Done This was clarified --Ita140188 (talk) 08:14, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done created a redirect from Cerchia dei Bastioni and linked --Ita140188 (talk) 03:13, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The ZTL encompasses" why is ZTL italicised?
 Done removed italics
  • "The area is accessible through 43 gates, monitored by video cameras." unreferenced.
 Done--Ita140188 (talk) 03:35, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Put non-breaking spaces between times and am/pm.
 Done
  • "after protests by parking owners" do you mean the owners of car parking facilties?
 Done yes, clarified --Ita140188 (talk) 03:14, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • " the entrance in the area is free from 6 pm on Thursday" you mentioned this free period above already.
 Done --Ita140188 (talk) 07:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Fixed. Not sure if it is enough? --Ita140188 (talk) 03:21, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "with over 9 seats" -> with more than nine seats.
 Done
  • "30% in the ZTL" why is ZTL in italics here?
 Done removed italics --Ita140188 (talk) 03:04, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • ""Data from Comune di Milano" needs a full stop as it's following other complete sentences.
 Done
  • "(8-9 am)" en-dash, not hyphen, and non-breaking space.
 Done
  • "about 7%[24]:8 " full stop missing.
 Done
  • Was it "decreasing trend in traffic" or a "trend in decreasing traffic"?
 Done
  • " In the first 6 months " six.
 Done
  • " pollution reductions alone is $3 billion.[3" non-breaking space between 3 and billion. And what's the scope of this saving, just Milan? And why in $?
 Done clarified the findings from the source. The gains are reported in $ by the source. --Ita140188 (talk) 08:00, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Covid-19 pandemic is overlinked.
 Done by other editor
  • " 10 am instead of 7:30" missing am
 Done by other editor
  • In "revenues" section, sustainable mobility and public transport are overlinked.
 Done --Ita140188 (talk) 03:24, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "came in for a lot of criticism" -> "has been highly criticised"
 Done
  • Merge the single-sentence para.
 Done
  • Council of State is overlinked.
 Done --Ita140188 (talk) 03:12, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • For ref authors, either last name, first name or first last, but be consistent.
 Done --Ita140188 (talk) 03:38, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • No spaced hyphens in the refs, spaced en-dashes instead per MOS please.
Not sure what do you mean? --Ita140188 (talk) 07:50, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That's it for a first pass. On hold, cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:50, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ita140188 looking very good now. A couple of things:
Thanks!
  • Non-English references need to use the language=Italian parameter.
 Done
  • I checked most of the "publishers" some of them were works i.e. newspapers, and changed the parameter from publisher to work. Can you re-check?
Rechecked, should be ok now. --Ita140188 (talk) 13:50, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Otherwise we're almost there. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 08:34, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, Ita140188 nice work, I'm happy that it passes GA standards. Well done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:18, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man: Thank you very much for the review! --Ita140188 (talk) 14:42, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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