Talk:Mikołaj Gryfita

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Encyclopedic tone

@Aszx5000

Sorry to bother, but I've now tried my hardest to make the pages tone seem as encyclopedic as possible. Therefore I'd like to ask if you could possibly re-check it and determine whether there's still changes that need to be made? If not, then please remove the issue listed and possibly change the class of the article if that was what drastically affected it.

Thank you, Setergh (talk) 17:27, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks @Setergh. I have also done some copyediting. Two things I could not resolve:

1. I was confused about the "Early life" and "Family life sections". Was Gryfita the son of Klemens from Brzeźnica or of Stępotas? I the "Family life" should be titled "Personal life".

2. A lot of the text in the Belz conflicts does not mention Gryfita and should be taken out. His biography should only be statements largely about him and his actions, rather than lengthly sections about events around him but for which does not mention him.

Hope that makes sense, Aszx5000 (talk) 22:43, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, two different sources I suppose, I'll try and mention that (unless maybe Klemens from Brzeźnica is the father and Stępotas is the mother? I have no confirmation on that though.
Yeah, you're right, it was a bit of a stretch on my part, sorry for that.

Thank you for your help with cleaning up as well, I didn't know the article was well, flawed. A lot of the mistakes come from me copy and pasting a lot from a page which was written in a story-telling way and the second is just me using information from another page.

Hope you wouldn't mind re-checking in a bit by the time I've cleared up everything. Thank you. Setergh (talk) 11:51, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, I've cleared up what I think was pointless.

There is still some information which doesn't particularly include Mikołaj Gryfita, but it's only because it's needed for the later paragraphs to actually make sense. Setergh (talk) 11:57, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I think that works now, I just tidied up some more sentences for clarity. thanks. Aszx5000 (talk) 13:33, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Just quickly wondering, still Start-class or no? Setergh (talk) 13:38, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

With 8 refs and not a huge amount of information about him specifically , I would leave at Start. Aszx5000 (talk) 13:39, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Alright! Once again, thank you for your help though. Setergh (talk) 13:44, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]