Talk:Mije (wrestler)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:45, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will review this entry. MWright96 (talk) 08:45, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead

"Mije (real name unrevealed,[a] born June 27, 1969) is a Mexican luchador, or professional wrestler. He currently works for the Mexican Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (CMLL) promotion where he portrays a heel" - consider merging these two sentences together

AAA (1998–2009)

"based on the El Alebrije figures" - It is El Alberije figures or just plain Alebrije figures because I'm not so sure?
"with his first recorded match taking place in April 2002" - where did this match take place?
"On August 20, 2018" - think is an incorrect date
"as they defeated champions Máscara Sagrada/Mascarita Sagrada as well as Monsther/Chucky" - by defeating
"to win the championship" - change the word in bold to title to avoid close repetition of champions/championship

Independent circuit (2009–2010)

"After leaving AAA Alebrije and Cuije began working on the Mexican independent circuit, especially for International Wrestling Revolution Group (IWRG) and Perros del Mal Producciones." - this sentence needs a reliable citation to verify that it is correct
"To try and address this issue the team began working as "Pequeño Cuije" "Little Cuije") and "Gran Alebrije" ("Big Alebrije") when working for Extreme Air Wrestling." - repetition of the word "working"
"Philadelphia, Pennsylvania based" - a hyphen is missing between "Pennsylvania" and "based"
"For the tournament Cuije wrestled alongside Alebrije and their partner El Oriental " - the words in bold are unneeded
"Cuije and El Alebrije were never officially stripped of the AAA Mascot Tag Team Championship and in fact had the championship belts in their position." - and kept the championship belts in their position.
The above sentence needs to have a reliable citation at the end of it to verify that it is correct

Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2010–present)

"The group drown into the arena" - entered the arena
"Alebrije returned to performing under the Kraneo gimmick, while Cuije was renamed Mije. This was done because AAA claimed the copyright ownership of the names and characters." - this could be better as two sentences
"as well as make special appearances on the Mexican independent circuit," - as well as making
"and saw Microman and El Gallito" - which
"Mije, Angelito, Chamuel, and El Gallito take on Microman, Atomo, Guapito, and Zacarias. In the end, Microman pinned Chamuel to win the tournament" -
"four weeks later the Micro-Estrellas" - This sentence needs to begin with a capital letter
"At the 2019 Homenaje a Dos Leyendas ("Homage to two legends") show Mije and his team once again lost." - who did Mije and his team lose to?

References

The hyphens in the refs should be replaced by en dashes (–) per MOS:DASH
Reference 5 looks like it is missing the page number(s)
References 16 and 17 are missing the authors of the respective articles
Reference 20: "!Problemas en la esquina técnica en la zona preliminar! !buena lucha especial y semifinal! !Mephisto va por el oro!" is dead and will need archiving
Reference 21 is missing Agence France-Presse as the agency that provided The Telegraph with the story

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 12:08, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Everything but sourcing is done. MPJ-DK (talk) 19:15, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- MWright96 All addressed. MPJ-DK (talk) 02:49, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 09:18, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Spanish typos

Hi. There are some Spanish typos. The usual Atomo - Átomo, cibernetico - cibernético, Zacarias - Zacarías. Also, Rio Bravo it's Río Bravo, but I don't know if there is some policy with cities. HHH Pedrigree (talk) 11:04, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Is it written as "Río Bravo" in English language sources? Zacarías I get, it's mainly covered in Spanish language sources so it should go with that, but Rio Bravo is not as obscure. MPJ-DK (talk) 13:38, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

well, I dont know. The article about the city isnt consistent about the subject https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/R%C3%ADo_Bravo,_Tamaulipas HHH Pedrigree (talk) 13:52, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]