Talk:Midnight Rain/GA1

GA Review

Passed. — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 00:09, 26 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Vaughan J. (talk · contribs) 09:49, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Just to let you all know that this is my first time reviewing for GA. — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 09:49, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section):

b. (citations to reliable sources):

c. (OR):

d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects):

b. (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Infobox and lead

Infobox looks very good here.
"some critics found the track captivating and interesting" → "some critics found the song captivating and interesting"
"It is driven by" → "The song is driven by"
"The track was certified gold" → "The song was certified gold"
"Swift included "Midnight Rain" on the set list of the Eras Tour (2023)." → "Swift included the song on the set list of the Eras Tour."

Background

"On August 28, 2022, during her acceptance speech for Video of the Year for All Too Well: The Short Film at the 2022 MTV Video Music Awards, singer-songwriter Taylor Swift announced her tenth studio album, set for release on October 21, 2022." → "On August 28, 2022, Swift announced her tenth studio album, set for release on October 21, 2022, during her acceptance speech when she won Video of the Year for All Too Well: The Short Film at the 2022 MTV Video Music Awards."
"The track-list was not immediately revealed." → "The tracklist was not immediately revealed."

Composition and lyrics

"the track incorporates" → "the song incorporates"
"to Antonoff's work on Lorde's 2017 album Melodrama." → "to Antonoff's work on singer-songwriter Lorde's 2017 album Melodrama."
"to Swift's track "Champagne Problems" from" → "to Swift's song "Champagne Problems", from"
"Some critics consider "Midnight Rain" to be" → "Some critics consider the song to be"
"For Esquire journalist Alex Bilmes, the lyrics" → "For Esquire journalist Alan Light, the lyrics"

Critical reception

"In the Associated Press, Elise Ryan found" → "Elise Ryan for the Associated Press found"
"feel universal" and" → "feel universal", and"

Commercial performance

"In Australia, the song peaked at number five on ARIA Top 50 Singles chart and received a gold certification from the Australian Recording Industry Association (ARIA).^[38][39]" → "In Australia, the song peaked at number five on the ARIA Top 50 Singles chart^[38] and received a gold certification from the Australian Recording Industry Association (ARIA).^[39]"

Recording and personnel

Change header name to "Credits and personnel".
Pipe producer to Record producer
Pipe mastering engineer to Mastering engineer
Pipe mix engineer to Mixing engineer

Charts

Good.

Certifications

Good.

Notes

Good.

References

Copyvio score is really good at 16%.
Wikilink Variety on ref 1.
Rename the author to "Lee, Taila" on ref 8.
Rename the author to "Light, Alan" and delete the author-link on ref 27.
Wikilink Billboard on ref 33.

Final comments and verdict

On hold — Until most of these issues are fixed; very nice job on this one. — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 09:49, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the quick review Vaughan J., I have addressed your comments accordingly. Lmk if the article needs additional work. Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 15:11, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
✓ Pass — I think there's nothing else to add to the article. I'm gonna pass this because I think the article stands out to me. Good job. First review, and it's a pass! — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 00:01, 26 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.