Talk:Microman (wrestler)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:10, 27 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"who is working for the Mexican" - works
"where their private lives are kept a secret from the wrestling fans." - concealed from wrestling fans.
"Microman's debut on April 30, 2017, also marked the debut of the CMLL Micro-Estrellas division," - the first comma is unneeded
"despite his diminutive stature of 1.00 m (3 ft 3 1⁄2 in)." - just 1 m (39 in) will suffice

"Microman was born on September 30, 1998, in Mexico City, Mexico, son of professional wrestling " - the son
"Microman was born on September 30, 1998, in Mexico City, Mexico," - this needs a reliable source to verify the information since The Telegraph does not mention it
"(real name not revealed).[4][a]." - the second period is redundant
"Growing up he was a big fan of" - idolized is more concise
"He initially studied computer sciences" - computer science
"in school but gave them up to start training for a professional wrestling career." - stopped to begin

"Microman and El Gallito defeated Zacarias and Cuije in the first-ever Micro-Estrellas match at one of CMLL's "Kids' day" shows. [4][6] " - the space between the end of the sentence and both references is unneeded
" At 1.00 m (3 ft 3 1⁄2 in) tall," - just 1 m (39 in) will suffice
"In the months following the anniversary" - how many months exactly?
Lucha libre should be italized
"per lucha libre traditions.[15]With the success of the Micro-Estrellas," - there should be a space between the ref and the start of the second sentence
"Chamuel pinned Microman to eliminate him and to win the championship" - the word in bold is redundant

"one of Mexico's larges independent promotions," - typo; should be largest
Wikilink Mr. Nibela on his only mention outside the italized show name
Zarchias is spelt as Zacarias
"For the 2020 Homenaje a Mr. Niebla show on January 4, 2020, Zacarias, dressed like the recently deceased Mr. Niebla, defeated Microman." - Super Luchas does not mention Zacarias defeated Microman dressed like Mr. Niebla. Please find another reliable source that explicitly states this

Wrestling Observer Newsletter, Voices of Wrestling and Súper Luchas should be italized because they are print publications
"rookie of the year awards," - Rookie of the Year award
CBS news should be wikilinked and "news" must begin with a capital letter

Be consistent in regards to whether you includee the translated title or not
Reference 4 should mention that Agence France-Presse is the agency that provided the story to The Telegraph
Wikilink The Telegraph to the appropriate article
Reference 25 should be in all capital letters per MOS:ALLCAPS
Reference 26 is missing the author

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 09:33, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 - I have addressed everything except for the height. I am using {{height|m=1}} which is the standard way to deal with height, which looks a little odd for someoone who is 1 meter tall. Do you want me to replace and type it out instead? MPJ-DK (talk) 12:29, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. I've made a minor change to the article. MWright96 (talk) 13:10, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]