Talk:Michael A. Monsoor/GA1
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- It is reasonably well written:
- Not Yet
- Please explain the significance of the Valor Device on his Bronze Star somewhere in the article, to differentiate it from a peacetime Bronze Star.
- Done. I added it as a footnote. --Kumioko (talk) 21:57, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
- It is factually accurate and verifiable:
- "He entered Basic Underwater Demolition/SEAL training but had to drop out because of an injury" - needs a ref.
- Done. I couldn't find were it came from so I removed it for now. --Kumioko (talk) 21:57, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
- "He later reentered and graduated from Class 250 on September 2, 2004 as one of the top performers in his class." - needs a ref.
- Done. --Kumioko (talk) 21:57, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
- It is broad in its coverage:
- Pass No problems there.
- It follows the neutral point of view policy:
- Pass No problems there.
- It is stable:
- Pass No problems there.
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate:
- Pass No problems there.
- Overall:
- On Hold to address issues. —Ed!(talk) 03:35, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
- All right, the article now meets the GA criteria according to my interpretation of them. Well done. —Ed!(talk) 23:17, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
- On Hold to address issues. —Ed!(talk) 03:35, 16 August 2009 (UTC)