Talk:Miao festivals

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Reviewer 2

I just add the date of the Miao Sisters Festival as following:

"The Miao Sisters Festival is celebrated between the 16th to the 18th of March (on the Chinese lunar calendar)" WENQIAOJIAO (talk) 13:17, 1 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Review

Hello, the article is really interesting (I just corrected some typos)! In general I think it is well written but in some points I had the impression that you were expressing your opinion rather than being neutral, maybe you could double check this. Fraapal (talk) 14:29, 1 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Review

Hello, I have read your article and I find it very intersting and full of information! I have just corrected some typos. BenedettaFlam (talk) 14:42, 1 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Observations and suggestions for improvements

The following observations and suggestions for improvements were collected, following expert review of the article within the Science, Technology, Society and Wikipedia course at the Politecnico di Milano, in June 2022.

The article needs a strong revision to rephrase some paragraphs that now are not fluent in terms of construction. The overall style should be refined as well to match scientific writing. The introduction and motivation section needs a more systematic articulation, in line with an encyclopedic entry, while the last sentence of the conclusions is hardly understandable. The bibliographic apparatus is adequate, but the article needs a strong work of cross-referencing with other Wikipedia articles, such as the Miao People one (which is very well written and composed). The suggestion is to take reference from that page also in terms of style and writing, especially for the introduction and the conclusions, which are at the moment the weakest part of the article about Miao festivals.

--BarettoDiArchitettura (talk) 08:38, 21 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]