Talk:Mexican Revolution/to do
- Actually, the Mexican Revolution, according to some scholars, does end in 1921 with the economical reforms by Cardenas. Though many believe that the 1917 Constitution marks the end of the revolution, Mexico at that time was still very unstable and turbulent, with reginal infightings all accross the rural areas. Thus, many scholars believe the Mexican revolution really ended with the stabilization of Mexico by President Cardenas, in 1921. This issue is, however, still debated by many scholars, so it is correct to say that the revolution ended 1917, and it is also correct to say that it really ended in 1921. Depends on your POV I guess...
- FIX THE DATES THEY ARE WAY OF!!!!
MEXICAN REVOLUTION (1910-1917)!!!!!!! not 1921!!!!!!!
- Improve readability, this article is awfuly written
- Linking, linking, linking (this article lacks wikilinks)
- Citations within the article (e.g. footnotes)
- Expand! Other wikipedia articles contain lot of info about this topic, it needs to be incorporated here
- Verify the accuracy of the information!!! I cannot emphasize this enough. The Plan de San Luis actually took place in St Louis Missouri (This is wrong. See notes below). Those are two big fat mistakes that even myself could notice. God knows what else could be so awfuly wrong!
- Move stuff that's clogging up this article to the various main articles (for people and movements).
- The spanish version of this article ought to be cross checked for errors.
- Whover said the Plan de San Luis "actually took place in St Louis Missouri" is reading a different chapter in some other country's history. Francisco I. Madero wrote the "Plan de lucha contra la dictadura" (Plan to fight against dictatorship) while he was in jail in San Luis Potosi. It was published in Texas while Madero was on exile, but it's know as Plan de San Luis since that is the place where the bulk of its content was actually born.
- Add a general overview in the first paragraph beyond the obvious "Period of social turmoil". That's an obvious statement. Add where, who, and why right in the first paragraph to keep the reader interested, and to give them a good definition to be able to use.
- If you are going to be a critic then please make sure your spelling is correct "awfuly"
try spell check. It's AWFULLY.
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