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Good articleMexican National Women's Tag Team Championship has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
March 31, 2020Good article nomineeListed
June 28, 2020Good topic candidatePromoted
January 24, 2024Featured topic removal candidateDemoted
Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:35, 30 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 17:35, 30 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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  • "is Mexican national tag team professional wrestling championship" - is a Mexican
  • "decided by a scripted ending to a match rather that by real competition." - rather by actual competition.
  • "The championship was introduced in mid-1991" - the infobox and prose that it was in mid-1990 not mid-1991

History

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  • "to become the inaugural champions." - the word in bold can be changed to winners to avoid close repetition of the same word in the same sentence
  • "Carrenza and Briosa broke up the team" - disbanded
  • "the championship stopped being promoted and neither champion" - try not to use a similar word close together in the same sentence

Reigns

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  • Delink Martha Villalobos since this is the second time she is mentioned in the prose
  • "Martha Villalobos's and Pantera Sureña's 792-day reign from December 20, 1991" - the extra s before the apostrophe is unneeded in AmEng

Rules

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  • "rather that any genuine competition." - better rather through actual competition.
  • "Occasionally a promotion declared the championship vacant, meaning there was no champion" - try not to repeat the same word in the same sentence
  • " being unable to defend the championship[e]" - a comma is missing between the word "championship" and the note
  • "to change hands in a Steel cage match." - the first letter in the word steel isn't normally captalized if it does not begin a sentence

2020

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  • "On its March 4, 2020, Informa show," - the comma highlighed in bold is not needed
  • "over three Sunday shows between March 15 and March 29, 2020" - March 15 and 29, 2020
  • "while the other four team" - typo; should be spelt as teams
  • "where the winning team will move" - the word in bold can be changed to either progress or advance
  • "will have to compete against each other." - be required
  • "Due to the 2019–20 coronavirus pandemic, the tournament ended up being postponed indefinitely." - was postponed

Block A

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  • Be consistent in how your referencing in this section. For example, you reference the last three teams but not the first two teams

References

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  • "Statistics for Professional wrestlers". PWI Presents: 2008 Wrestling Almanac and book of facts. Kappa Publications. 2008 Edition." - This source is missing the ISBN number
  • Reference 11 is dead and will need to be archived
  • Reference 15 is missing the title name and the page number it can be found on
  • Reference 16 is missing the date it was published and the date it was accessed

These are all the issues I discovered. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 20:06, 30 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]