Talk:Mexican National Cruiserweight Championship/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:19, 20 May 2020 (UTC)

Shall be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 14:19, 20 May 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "From its creation in 1983, it was not promoted by one specific promotion but shared between many Mexican promotions primarily" - From its establishment in 1983, no one promotion promoted the championship but was shared between several Mexican promotions, and not exclusively by Empresa Mexicana de Lucha Libre (EMLL).
• "Being a professional wrestling championship, it is not won legitimately: it is instead won via a scripted ending to a match" - it was not won legittimately but via a scripted ending to a match
• "Crusierweight" does not need to begin with a capital letter
• "defeating Insolito in the final match." - just the final. will suffice
• "In the mid-1990s AAA gained control of the championship when then-champion" - when title holder
• The two mentions of Blue Demon, Jr don't need the comma in the name
• "took full control of all aspects of the Championship." - took full control of the championship. is simpler and concise
• "The title was barely defended since between the early 2000s and when it was officially vacated by AAA on December 8, 2008." - The title was seldom defended since from the early 2000 and it was offically vacated by AAA on December 8, 2008.

History

• "allowing the Universal Wrestling Association (UWA) host a tournament for the inaugural champion." - the Universal Wrestling Association (UWA) to host
• "Records are unclear on who participated in the tournament," - as to who
• "In 1992, then-reigning champion" - the reigning holder
• "as he was injured and thus unable to defend the title." - because of an injury that meant he was unable to defend the title.
• "only to give it up in November" - relinquish
• "as he stopped working as Karis la Momia and instead began working as La Parka Jr." - changed his ring name to La Parka Jr.
• "La Parka Jr. would later regain the championship" - changed the word in bold to he to avoid having the last work of the previous sentence like this
• Wikilink the first mention of La Parka Jr. in this section

Reigns

• La Parka Jr does not need to be linked here
• "A total of twelve wrestlers have held the championship throughout its history, with only one person having held it twice, La Parka Jr., who first won the championship" - repetition of the word "championship"
• "there were plans to bring it back in February 2013," - revive it
• "La Parka Jr.'s second reign set a longevity record, lasting 3,591 days, from 1999 until 2008. The shortest reign belonged to Charro de Jalisco, who held it for 65 days." - These two sentences are missing reliable source(s) to verify if they are correct

Rules

• "The lucha libre commissions" - typo; should be commission's
• "Cruiserweight" does not need to begin with a capital letter
• "a promotion declared the championship vacant, which meant there was no champion at that point in time." - repetition of "champion"
• "This was either due to a storyline,[d] or real-life issues such as a champion suffering an injury being unable to defend the championship," - same issue as above

Title history

• The 17th column that has the word "vacated" in the table needs to be referenced to reliable source(s) just like the others

Footnotes

• References A and H need to be referenced to reliable source(s) to verify that the information is correct

References

• Be consistent in including the trans-title field in the appropriate sources
• The work of Reference 5 should be WrestlingData and not CageMatch
• Reference 12 is missing the author and the date it was published
• Also the same reference has the access date as 2009-06-14 when others state their access date as May 15, 2020 for example

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 15:04, 20 May 2020 (UTC)

• MWright96 - "La Parka Jr.'s second reign set a longevity record, lasting 3,591 days, from 1999 until 2008. The shortest reign belonged to Charro de Jalisco, who held it for 65 days." the tabel below has sourced lengths for every championship reign, the "sort" option quickly idenfies the shortest and the longest reigns - so it's sourced in the table. MPJ-DK (talk) 17:18, 20 May 2020 (UTC)
• MWright96 - I believe I have addressed all concerns. MPJ-DK (talk) 17:40, 20 May 2020 (UTC)
  • @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. I've made a few changes to the article. MWright96 (talk) 07:45, 21 May 2020 (UTC)