Talk:Mexican National Atómicos Championship/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:12, 21 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"The title is a national title" - same issue as the first point raised in the lead section
"As is the case for all the Mexican National titles," - every Mexican national title,
"The championship is also an Atómicos championship," - repetition of "championship"
"it meant that officially non-Mexican citizens were prohibited from challenging or holding the championship," - it offically prohibited non-Mexican citizens from challenging or holding the championship,
"which means there is no champion at that point in time." - holder
"or real-life issues like a champion suffering an injury" - such as

"The first champions were crowned after an eight-team tournament that saw Pierroth Jr., Villano III, Villano IV, and Villano V become the inaugural champions" - winners
"Over the next couple of years" - How many years exactly?
"trade the championship between the two teams." - typo; should be traded
"won the championship, ending the Los Vipers/Los Vatos Locos dominance of the championship. [t]" - title
Plus the note in the sentence above should not have a space between it and the period to end the sentence
"kicking off a 789-day reign." - beginning
"only for a reorganized Black Family, now known as La Secta del Mesias ("The Sect of the Messiah"), won the championship on May 20, 2007." - to claim the title
"in storyline terms because they attacked Vampiro after winning the championship." - in a storyline where they attacked
"such as the atómicos championship," - the word in bold should be italized

"left AAA in the fall of 1996." - avoid using seasons per MOS:SEASON
"the championship was inactive for over a year until a tournament" - more than a year

"Documentation for the full brackets of the tournament has not been found documented," - the word in bold isn't needed
"but based on the results 10 teams competed in the tournament to determine the first-ever champions." - inaugural
"After initial rounds on August 3 and August 4, 1996," - the inital rounds of August 3 to 4,
"on their way to the finals." - en route
"first round" in the able should begin with capital letters with the first letter only

All mentions of the word Atómicos in this section should be capalized
"and for approximately a year and a half" - 1½ years
"In round two, on August 13, 198," - the year isn't needed since it is already mentioned in this paragraph
"In round two," - the next round,

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 07:40, 22 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 - Addressed all but one comment. (Dark Cuervo (3), Dark Escoria (3), Dark Espíritu (2) and Dark Ozz (3)) for the (3)), the first ) closes the (3) and the second one closes the parenthesis that starts before Dark Cuero. Everything else has been adjusted, thanks. MPJ-DK (talk) 14:07, 22 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 18:14, 22 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]