Talk:Merry Christmas (Mariah Carey album)/GA1

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Reviewer: — Legolas ^(talk2me) 12:21, 23 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Nathaniel(?), I am starting the review for the article. Please bear with the corrections to be listed. — Legolas ^(talk2me) 12:21, 23 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hehe, well I appreciate the name :), you can call me Nathan :D, and yes I'm ready for you!--PeterGriffin • Talk2Me 23:38, 23 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Oh snap. I was reading the Bartimaeus trilogy. And probably coupled your name from that. Chorry!!! — Legolas ^(talk2me) 03:42, 24 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hahahaha, its alright, I'm glad you payed attention and knew I'm really not Peter :)--PeterGriffin • Talk2Me 02:43, 25 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I will finish the review before I leave permanently NAthan. — Legolas ^(talk2me) 09:02, 3 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Nathan, I have started reviewing the article. I must say, I am quite impressed — Legolas ^(talk2me) 12:08, 5 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Why thank you Legolas, I think you'd find my more recent work to be even better

. Thank you! ;)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 01:03, 6 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ok here goes the review.

In the infobox, you need to have consistency for the singles release date.
In the past, Carey had always described herself as a spiritual and religious individual. --> You need to provide a timeline, as in when Carey said that.
e albums release --> album's release
with whom she collaborated during past projects --> give the name of which albums she colaborated with Afa.
In prose, don't use language like "5x platinum", convert it to word. Also for the "x" symbols, use the × symbol.
Remove the (sales thresholds)) link from certifications. It has become redundant now.
Can you search google archives for some more review? Two seems a little too less. — Legolas ^(talk2me) 09:44, 10 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there! All fixed! I tried finding more reviews (when I wrote the article I myself was unpleased by the amount) but to no avail. I believe everything else has been addressed. :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 10:52, 10 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Not much to do, passing it. — Legolas ^(talk2me) 11:08, 10 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]