Talk:Mercedes-Benz GLE/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MrLinkinPark333 (talk · contribs) 22:28, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello. Thank you for submitting this article to Good Articles Nominations. Unfortuantely, this article will have to be quickfailed due to Wikipedia:Good article criteria#Immediate failures #1 "It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria". Specifically, this article is a long way from passing criteria #2 Verifiable with no original research. The list below is a list of verification issues summarized into categories. The parts that I'm listing are where the uncited parts start.

Small sentences without citations

First generation (W163; 1997–2005): "Four-wheel, electronic traction system"
Second generation (W164; 2006–2011): "Models using Bluetec Diesel engine "
Third generation (W166; 2011–2019): "Open front and rear differentials", "These plants perform final assembly", "In the second half of 2015 a facelifted W166" and "The previous Popemobile"
- Body variants "The C292 coupe was unveiled"
Fourth generation (W167; 2019–present) "The fourth generation GLE-Class was unveiled"

Parts of paragraphs without citations

First generation (W163; 1997–2005) - Awards subsection from W163 criticism onwards
Second generation (W164; 2006–2011) - 1st paragraph (2003 design patents)
- Facelift 1st, 2nd, and 5th paragraphs (2007 designs, headlights, 2011 edition)
Third generation (W166; 2011–2019) - 1st paragraph (refine)
- Facelift (GLE-Class) - sentences from five-door coupe onwards in the only paragraph

Entire paragraphs without citations

First generation (W163; 1997–2005): 2nd paragraph (release of W163), paragraphs 5 to 7 (Alabama construction, Ml 430, Jurassic Park)
- Facelift: 1st and 2nd paragraph (2001 update, 2005 closure)
Second generation (W164; 2006–2011): 2nd to 4th paragraphs (new factory, W164 platform, 2006 features)
Third generation (W166; 2011–2019) - 3rd paragraph (W166),
Fourth generation (W167; 2019–present) - 2nd paragraph (GLE engines)
- Long-Wheelbase GLE-Class (V167) - 2nd paragraph (LWB GLE size)

Other

The tables at Engines (1997–2005) and Engines (2019–present) are uncited
Most of the production at Production and sales is missing
- Some of the sales parts are uncited.

Overall

Since this is a long list to read, the main things that you need to know are:

Whole uncited paragraphs: four in 1st generation, three in 2nd generation, two in 1st generation facelift subsection, 1 in 3rd generation, 1 in 4th generation, 1 in Long-Wheelbase GLE-Class 4th gen subsection,
Partially uncited paragraphs: three in 2nd generation facelift subsection, one in first generation, one in second generation, one in third generation, one in Facelift (GLE-Class) 3rd generation subsection.

With the twelve whole uncited paragraphs alone, this article is a long way from passing criteria #2 Verifiable with no original research for a Good Article. This is not including the seven additional paragraphs that are partially uncited. Therefore, I will have to quick-fail this article. I hope this review does not discourage you from working on this article. Feel free to nominate this article again in the future once these issues have been resolved. Please also see Wikipedia:Good article criteria for the Good article criteria that reviewers look for in a nomination. Thank you for nominating this article at Good Articles Nominations! :) --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 22:28, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]