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Archive 1

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Plot summary

The plot summary is miserably written: it comes across as disjointed and confusing. If no one wants 2rewrite it, I shall gladly rewrite all by myself.Etillenecuit (talk) 00:49, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

Disjointed because it covers all of the many plot lines briefly? You can attempt a rewrite, but if you just intend to make it longer with more detail, you shouldn't.— TAnthony^Talk 01:03, 25 April 2016 (UTC)