Talk:Meine Seel erhebt den Herren, BWV 10/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:37, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

• Why isn't "Magnificat" in italics, per the article it links to?

Because the article it links to still thinks it is Latin, while a discussion supported that terms from Latin that became part of the English language (Requiem, Agnus Dei, Nunc dimittis ...) don't need that. --GA

• "narrates Mary's" I hate pipelinks to redirects, avoid that here with Mary please.

fixed, thank you --GA

• "only beginning and end of the text were " "the beginning..." ?

fixed --GA

• "which he also kept" replace "he" with "was".

why passive voice? --GA

• You link trumpet but not oboe, why?

both unlinked now (links to Baroque instruments in the link before)

• You appear to have different piped links for "Lutheran", please be consistent.

made two consistent, and removed the one to only a section of the same --GA

• Why 76?

good catch! --GA

• "Bach-Cantatas website." Wikipedia appears to italicise websites, certainly in its referencing templates such as {{cite web}}.

Nobody complained in FAs, but changed. --GA

Everything else seems in order, so I'll put it on hold. The Rambling Man (talk) 22:33, 30 April 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for many helpful comments! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:34, 1 May 2017 (UTC)