Talk:Megumi Nakajima/GA1

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 02:44, 9 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 02:44, 9 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 1 needs to be expanded to a full citation.
Ref 4 is dead.
"|lead=yes" needed for {{nihongo}}.
"and singer from Mito, Ibaraki who is affiliated with E-Stone Music." Comma needed after Ibaraki.
"Her path to becoming a musician" Euphemism?
"Her break came in 2007" Debut?
"she along withHaruka Tomatsu" Space needed.
Macross Frontier is being overlinked in the article.
The last paragraph of the Musical styles and influences section belongs in the music career more.
Any information on how she produced her first album?
"Lagrange: The Flower of Rin-neseries" Space here too.
"Happiness Charge Precure!" Not correctly formatted title of the anime.
Why do some of the roles have Japanese translations and some don't?
I would considering linking her works with articles from the Japanese Wikipedia.
- Use {{Interlanguage link}} for Japanese Wikipedia articles.
Link video game consoles and compact disc.
Assuming good faith on Japanese sources.

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:21, 13 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I've fixed almost all of the issues mentioned above. Ref 4 was a permanent dead link so, while dead links aren't prohibited, I decided to simply commented out since there was a working link that verified the same information. The lede has been revised slightly too, and the words with missing spaces have been fixed. I've delinked Macross wherever not necessary, and I moved the hiatus part to the music section, as you suggested. Unfortunately, I was unable to find any interviews about the production of I Love You. The Japanese translations were not added by me but by previous editors; they didn't seem to be necessary so I simply removed them. I linked the consoles, but not to compact disc since I'd argue that CDs are well-known enough and in any case there's that hover thing where putting the cursor over CD shows "compact disc". Any more problems? Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 11:00, 13 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

After a few more minor issues were found and fixed on Discord, I am passing this article. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:33, 14 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]