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GA Review

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Nominator: 5225C (talk · contribs) 11:24, 27 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 00:01, 19 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this. 750h+ 00:01, 19 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

prose

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lead

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  • took over development of the MCL60 ==> "took over the development of the MCL60"
  • the fourth round of the season ==> "the fourth season round"
  • not seen in modern Formula One, and appeared to influence the development programs of several other teams. remove the comma

background

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competition and development history

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assessment and characteristics

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verdict

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