Talk:Mazey Day (Black Mirror)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 01:08, 6 August 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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I have only ever quickpassed a handful of articles out of nearly 200 reviews, and this is going to be one of them. The prose is tight, well-sourced, and compliant; the images have no issues; the spot checks and Earwig all came back clean. Very well done Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 01:08, 6 August 2023 (UTC)

Copy changes

• The company NVIZ provided compositing of graphics such as computer and television screens, and worked on redesigning Málaga backgrounds to resemble Los Angeles. No need for the comma as NVIZ is the subject in both halves. User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences

This is the only copy quibble I even have with this entire article. And that's astounding. Given the circumstances, I have made the change.

Spot checks

• 11: Vanity Fair article. Brooker: That's not what the show was ever intended to do. If you look at our first episode, you can tell it was obviously designed to be startling and surprising and weird. The second half of the statement about vacillating over the Red Mirror label is in [12] and also checks out.
• 16: Article in Deadline. “I just came off of shooting that, actually. I just shot that in June,” she told Deadline of the part. Y
• 27: Mashable, ...surprisingly mixed with fantasy Y
• 47: Ed Power's Daily Telegraph ranking of Black Mirror episodes. 14. Mazey Day (season six, episode four) Y
• 50: GQ ranking: 24. Mazey Day (Season 6, Episode 4) Y
• 55: IndieWire ranking: 26. “Mazey Day” Y

Images

There is one non-free image, the episode art at Netflix with NFUR, and four Creative Commons-licensed photos of various people and celebrities. All have suitable alt text.

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