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Article draft for review

This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered.

Hello Wikipedia editors! My name is Maria. I'm an employee of Mayo Clinic Health System, and aware of the rules for conflict of interest editing. I've disclosed my COI here and on my User page, and will not make direct edits to the article. I'm looking for editors to review the article and make appropriate changes on my behalf.

I have been working on an updated draft of this article. My draft expands the history of the health system, our facilities, research, and community work. I also consolidated the table of locations in a way that I hope is easier to manage. I've uploaded the draft to my user space for review here.

Feedback is welcomed, and I look forward to working with editors to improve this article! Thanks, MM from MCHS (talk) 15:05, 6 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@MM from MCHS: Per the conversation at User talk:MM from MCHS/Draft:Mayo Clinic Health System, I assume that the requested edit is responded to and appropriate edits already made. Shall I close this particular edit request now? —CX Zoom[he/him] ^{(let's talk • {C•X})} 20:05, 7 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Since there was no respond to the above question, I'm going to close this request as answered. Z1720 (talk) 23:49, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]