Talk:Maurice (emperor)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 20:11, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:11, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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1.a Y

1.b Y
2
2.a Y

2.b Y

2.c Y

2.d Y
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3.a Y

3.b Y
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4.a Y
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5.a Y
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6.a Y

6.b Y

No DAB links Y
No dead links Y
No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

The Empire's eastern border in the Caucasus was vastly expanded... suggest:
Under him the Empire's eastern border in the Caucasus was vastly expanded...
He may have been a Cappadocian Greek,[3][4] or a Hellenised Armenian.[5] The issue cannot be resolved. suggest:
Sources conflict over his birthplace, with some calling him a Cappadocian Greek, others a Hellenised Armenian; The historian Evagrius Scholasticus records a probably invented descent from old Rome.
In the same month Emperor Tiberius was struck down by an illness which was shortly to kill him suggest:
In the same month Emperor Tiberius was struck down by an illness which shortly thereafter killed him.
@Gog the Mild: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 22:08, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Iazyges: Much better. Thanks. Assessing three GANs in 48 hours. That has to be some sort of record! That is, I nominated the first of the three less than 48 hours ago. Maurice took you less than 5 hours.

Gog the Mild (talk) 22:28, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]