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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:17, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
Am going to review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 12:17, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
[edit]- "Matthew Marinelli (born March 20, 1985[1]), known by his ring name, Matt Taven," the ref is better placed outside the parentheses, not in them
- "Taven won ROH's 2013 Top Prospect Tournament to become a full-time wrestler for ROH." - close repetition of the acronyms ROH
- "Taven is the second wrestler to win championships in ROH, CMLL and NJPW, with the first being Rocky Romero." - you could also write this sentence as Taven is one of two wrestlers to win championships in ROH, CMLL and NJPW; the other being Rocky Romero.
Debut and ROH Television Champion (2009–2014)
[edit]- Taven's first match for Ring of Honor (ROH) was on May 8, 2009, where he lost to Jaleel Patel in a match that took place before cameras began recording the event's matches." - too many mentions of the word match(es) in the same sentence
- "Taven competed in a few tag team matches over the course of 2010 and 2011," - how many exactly?
- "At ROH's Boiling Point show, on August 11, 2012," - the second comma in this portion of text is not needed
- "with the storyline reward being that Taven would be given a full-time ROH contract." - earn
- "he lost to Adrenaline Rush (ACH and TaDarius Thomas) and C&C Wrestle Factory (Caprice Coleman and Cedric Alexander)" - think it should be made clear that these were teams that Taven faced
Teaming with Michael Bennett (2014–2015)
[edit]- "unsuccessfully challenging him for the ROH World Television Championship on 3 different occasions." - three to comply with MOS:NUMERAL
- "where he was defeated by Lethal in a Steel Cage match" - steel cage match
- "This was an angle used to write Taven off of television." - the text in bold is informal and will need to be rewritten
- The final two sentences in the first paragraph of this section lacks reliable sources
- Also "of television" should be changed to on television
- "He made his return at September 27 tapings where he aligned himself"- at the tapings on September 27, where he aligned himself
- "Nearly one year later, on September 18, 2015," - Almost one year later on September 18, 2015
The Kingdom and World Championship pursuits (2016–present)
[edit]- "tearing an anterior cruciate ligament and medial meniscus and rupturing a lateral meniscus" - the words highlighted in bold should be wikilinked
- "On May 10, 2017, at ROH/NJPW War Of The Worlds 2017" - the first comma in this portion of text is unneeded
- "holding them until March 16, 2019. On March 15, 2019, at the ROH 17th Anniversary Show, " - try not to have the last words of a sentence start the next one like this.
- "but they couldn't get him over." - unsure as to what this means; please reword to a more formal statement without using contractions
- "Jerome Cusson said his title win "actively hurt ROH" since it isn't "a draw" - was not
Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2016–2019)
[edit]- "Taven returned to CMLL on March 17, 2017, unsuccessfully challenging Último Guerrero for the NWA World Historic Middleweight Championship at the 2017 Homenaje a Dos Leyendas show." - at that year's
- "He returned to Mexico later in 2017, participating in the 2017 International Gran Prix as part of "Team International"." - repetition of the year "2017" in the same sentence
- "Taven returned to CMLL on March 16, 2018, participating in that year's Homenaje a Dos Leyendas show, where he, Atlantis, and Niebla Roja defeated Los Guerreros Laguneros (Euforia, Gran Guerrero, and Último Guerrero)." - Not mentioned by the source attached to it. Please find an alternative reliable source that explicitly states this information
- "Afterwards Taven and Volador Jr. joined forces as Los Ingobernables (Rush and El Terrible) attacked the two" - think there are some words missing from this sentence
References
[edit]- Reference 8 is permanently dead and will need to be replaced
- Reference 21 is missing the publisher
- The author of Reference 35 is missing from the template
- References 37 and 38 are missing the author of the sources and the dates they were published
- Reference 40 is missing the date it was published
- Reference 44 directs to a suspended Twitter account
- Reference 60 is missing the author of the source
- References 61 and 62 are missing the dates they were published, the dates when they were accessed and the fact there are written in Spanish
- The publisher of Reference 68 should be in the work field
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 15:15, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
- MWright96 - first of all, thank you. And I believe I have addressed all issues?? MPJ-DK (talk) 23:39, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
- @MPJ-DK: Promoting to GA class. I've made one edit to fix a referencing issue. MWright96 (talk) 10:37, 5 April 2020 (UTC)