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Hello 1292simon. Can you say some more about your COI tag for this article? The primary author/editor of the page is not connected to the topic, and the language all seems pretty neutral to me. Thanks. ExtandTor (talk) 21:47, 1 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • Sure, I'm happy to provide some more detail. The language is in places subjective and reads like a promotion rather than an encyclopedia article. Examples are using the word "highlighted" instead of "identified", and phrases such as "While many of the mathematicians featured by MGB are university professors, a diverse variety of professional positions is represented". Cheers, 1292simon (talk) 10:03, 28 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • I guess I get the point about highlighted vs identified, but can you elaborate on the other phrase? I'm not trying to be difficult. I really don't see how that phrase is non-neutral. it seems very factual and objective. So I don't know how to fix it and I don't know how to use it to see other examples in the article. ExtandTor (talk) 15:22, 28 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]