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Reviewer: Cherrell410 (talk · contribs) 15:43, 4 January 2024 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it well written?
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Is it verifiable with no original research?
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
- C. It contains no original research:
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- Is it neutral?
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Is it stable?
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Could you add an image to either the background or lyrics section?
- B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Suggestions for improvement below:
- Refs: the only ref that concerns me and should be replaced is ref 35
- Background: "Swift wrote and produced "Mastermind" alongside eight songs with Antonoff, who also co-wrote all of them" should be rewritten
- Lyrics, first paragraph: [14][15][16][17],[9][19][20][21], remove/fix/seperate per WP:CITEKILL
- @Cherrell410: Thanks for the review. I have addressed all points accordingly. Ref #35 is self-published via Facebook by the Recording Industry Association of Malaysia so it should satisfy WP:SELFPUB. Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 02:52, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
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