Jump to content

Talk:Massimo Vidoni

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

First time posting a Wiki Article

[edit]

Hi all, I'm attempting to post my first wiki article by writing about a prominent business personality in my region. As a foodie and someone who is interested in the restaurant business, I chose this subject because I felt like he had gained enough note to have a Wiki entry of his own. I'd really appreciate any insight or advice on improving this page.

Cheers,

Nanwikieditor01 (talk) 18:53, 8 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I still see a lot of puffery. Take out every positive adjective and see if any sentence feels like it’s lacking a neutral adjective. 2.99.61.36 (talk) 20:10, 9 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Press coverage

[edit]

This was included as a list in the article, but that's not something we usually do. Moving it here for reference.

––FormalDude (talk) 05:23, 9 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]