Talk:Maryland Route 228/GA1
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Reviewer: --PCB 01:32, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- Nice job how you completely did the article in only four edits.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- I will put the article on hold for the few prose issues I have.
- Pass/Fail:
- What project? (lead)
- I rewrote the last two sentences of the Lead to remove the ambiguity. VC 03:26, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- The description of lanes in the route description is pretty confusing. I don't have many suggestions for rewording, but I suggest that you reword it somehow.
- Can you be more specific about what confuses you? VC 03:44, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Never mind that. I read it over again and again and can't find any better way to say it. The article is a pass. --PCB 04:16, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Can you be more specific about what confuses you? VC 03:44, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- There are several overlinking instances, such as the continuous-flow interchange and MD 210.
- Both items are linked twice: once in the prose and once in the caption of the photo, which is MOS-compliant. VC 03:26, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Could you specify what Piney Branch is?
- I added a clause that Piney Branch is a tributary of Mattawoman Creek. VC 03:26, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- There's a repeating pattern in the first paragraph of the history. "A BLA was BLAHed to/in BLAH in YEAR." Maybe you should mix this up a little.
- There is sufficient variety in how I phrase the content of that paragraph. It is not like I am using the same words in every sentence. VC 03:26, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Could you get a little more information about 228A? History if possible? Maybe a little more about the route?--PCB 01:50, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- I have a general idea of when MD 228A was built or assigned, but I am unable to support it with concrete sources. The road is a very short state-maintained section of a county highway that is not notable. VC 03:26, 22 February 2011 (UTC)