Talk:Mary K. Hawes

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Try to add a side info box with a picture (if possible) and some basic information such as date born/ died and where she lived
“chaired the data descriptions subcommittee the Short-Range Committee” is somewhat difficult to follow
I don’t love the sentence opening “As of 1954…”, It seems to suggest that the action is still ongoing.
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There is only one practical link to your page, try to link your other wikipedia articles with your piece
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Mary Louise Kropp

I'm fairly sure that Hawes was born Mary Louise Kropp on 25 January 1910 and died 17 November 1994.

1910 Census, living in Chattanooga, Tennessee - https://www.ancestry.co.uk/discoveryui-content/view/129392882:7884

School Yearbook for the University of Chattanooga - https://www.ancestry.co.uk/discoveryui-content/view/1444393176:1265?tid=&pid=&queryId=0c10a6ffa2b71202b35bf2f4716164ea&_phsrc=qTy417&_phstart=successSource

Article mentioning her graduation from the universities of Chattanooga and Oklahoma - https://www.newspapers.com/clip/113977766/the-san-bernardino-county-sun/

Article which shows a picture of Hawes, same person as the one from the Yearbook -https://www.newspapers.com/clip/113977854/dayton-daily-news/

Marriage to Norman Emery Hawes - https://www.newspapers.com/clip/113977925/the-commercial-appeal/

Norman's death in 1950 - https://search.ancestry.co.uk/cgi-bin/sse.dll?indiv=1&dbid=5164&h=5844237&tid=&pid=&queryId=5e25222b3645b34cbb4b283dba0dc76d&usePUB=true&_phsrc=qTy425&_phstart=successSource

Article that mentions her husband dying eleven years before - https://www.newspapers.com/clip/113977972/the-daily-oklahoman/

SSDI record from 1994 (note the mention of Pennsylvania, which is where she and Norman lived at the time of his death) - https://search.ancestry.co.uk/cgi-bin/sse.dll?indiv=1&dbid=3693&h=26288370&tid=&pid=&queryId=e0e42745aee1731dd32afa969b464f62&usePUB=true&_phsrc=qTy427&_phstart=successSource

Skycloud86 (talk) 11:39, 2 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]