Talk:Mary Fleetwood Berry

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Comments from student peer reviewers

Peer Review 1: Very interesting topic - not very well know, which makes it interesting to read about. That being said, it is a hard topic to write about as their is little written on it, making sources and information harder to find. Thus, I understand why you do not have a lot of sources. Obviously, more sources the better, but not always possible. Personally, I think it is a little short, more details could be written on what she did (ex: campaigns, protests, ‘lobbying’, etc.), if information is possible to find. Also, education is not discussed even though the subheading says so, you might want to add in her education if possible. Furthermore, I would suggest that you include more in-text citations for your sources in order to explain where your information is from (Early life and education section has no in-text citations - important to cite where info is from). Overall, the article is well written, neutral, and will be a good addition to Wikipedia. Good job! Dwebsterbu (talk) 14:48, 19 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Peer review 2: I found it very interesting that you incorporated her early life in your text. It brings a good insight into her views and political ideals, in my opinion. You could also look at her formal education to see if it has some links with her political ideals. I also like the fact that you brought up World War 1 and maybe you could go a bit deeper into how it affected her views and role for woman suffrage? Overall, very interesting article! Eric