Talk:Mark Oliphant/GA1

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Reviewer: Gilderien (talk · contribs) 11:34, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Why is "The two men got along very well, dining at Trader Vic's in Oakland" releveant? Was it a regular or frequent occurence? Please clarify.
- It establishes the personal relationship between the two, which becomes important later on. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:50, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
" Lady Elizabeth Cockcroft who had died the year before" - the way this is written, it implies that they may have been more children, which there were not.
- I don't follow this. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:50, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  - Omitting the comma from " alongside Timothy Cockcroft, the infant son of Sir John and Lady Elizabeth Cockcroft, who had died the year before." implies that there were more children than the one who died.--Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 18:25, 12 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    - I added the comma; is it okay now? Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:32, 12 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
      - Yep, all good. --Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 19:53, 13 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"the klyston capable of generating 400W" - do you mean klystron?
- Yes. Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:39, 13 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
" large-scale railgun which was used as a scientific instrument.experiments with plasma physics" - do you mean "instrument in experiments" or has some text been accidentally deleted?
- Yes. Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:39, 13 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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