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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:21, 13 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "planning area" what's that?
  • "2008 Land Transport Master Plan" this sounds notable enough for an article.
  • "Platform level of Marina South Pier MRT station." fragment, no full stop required.
  • "The North South line, " put the abbreviation here.
  • And then use it!
  • "at a contract sum of" contract is repeated.
  • "the waler components" what's that?
  • "which crushed the worker" what, the dislodged water?
  • "then-Minister for Transport" I don't think "then-" is needed, it's pretty obvious that it's a contemporary discussion.
  • "North South line (NSL), " should have done this in the previous section.
  • "station showcases two " not encyclopedic tone.
  • "two parts[22] using" move that ref to the end of the sentence.
  • "20 different shades of colours" why not just "20 different colours"?
  • "Prvacki proceeded to hand-paint the various slabs and united them" -> "Prvacki hand-painted the various slabs and united them"
  • Plenty of spaced hyphens which should be en-dashes.

That's all I can see in a first read, on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 12:19, 14 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]