Talk:Marina Kondratyeva/GA1
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Nominator: Gerda Arendt (talk · contribs) 18:52, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 23:59, 23 October 2024 (UTC)
Will do Gerda Arendt. 750h+ 23:59, 23 October 2024 (UTC)
- lead
- Reference the quote in the lead per MOS:LEADCITE.
- done --GA
- London and the Metropolitan Opera already in the is "already" necessary?
- well, not necessary, but I was really surprised what degree of culture exchange happened that early, inspite of the Cold War. You can remove it if you think it's better without. --GA
- Just a suggestion that it's preferable to add a comma before "including" (contemporary ballets including world
- not sure about UK English, also as what follows is not a long list, but it doesn't hurt ;) - done --GA
- biography
- including world premiered, choreographed by new talents ==> "including world premieres, choreographed by new talents"
- yes, typo --GA
- was not imitation of a ==> "was not an imitation of a"
- taken --GA
- other
- Sources and images look good @Gerda Arendt:. Happy to pass once my above concerns are addressed. 750h+ 08:45, 26 October 2024 (UTC)
- all done I think, thank you for looking carefully! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:14, 26 October 2024 (UTC)
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