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The intro seems too long for an article this size[1], could be cut by one third.
Perhaps say "A drawing of Mariam Dadiani" in the infobox image caption, instead of having her name as a separate sentence.
The images of her husbands seem a bit cluttered on the right next to the infobox and another image, perhaps left align.
The two first sentences under "Family background and first marriage" are very long and convoluted, perhaps put some of the information in parenthesis, or split up these sentences.
Some terms, such as Prince of Guria, are only linked in the intro, though they should all also be linked in the article body.
"and took Mariam and her son, Otia" I assume he was the son of Simon?
"at Jerusalem" in Jerusalem?
"won for Kartli relative peace" won relative peace for Kartli.
"But Rostom's control otf Kartli" Of?
"against the Iranian hegemony." I don't think you need "the".
"a recent widower of around 70" This is his age?
"which was considered as its spheres of influence" Within its sphere of influence?
"tones of silver" Tonnes.
"institutions and perishes" Parishes.
"Kartli, ruled by the Muslim king, whom his mostly Christian subjects accused of transplanting Iranian and Muslim customs into the country, acquired a patroness of the Christian church and culture." Rather convoluted sentence.
"edited sometime between" Some time.
"The manuscript, known the" Known as.
You have many illustrations by Cristoforo Castelli, anything on his relation to these royals and the circumstances under which the drawings were made?
"no children of either of his marriages" From either.
"Another candidacy was" Candidate.
The article mainly seems to be about her husbands. Is there no more info specifically about her? Was she known for her beauty, since so many married her, or was that mainly for connections?
"a lock of her grey heir" Hair.
Otia had no children?
"and died aged over 70." Only mentioned in intro, should be mentioned in the article as well.
"The blinded prince Mamuka died in 1654." Needs a source.
