Talk:Marbled electric ray/GA1
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 15:42, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
Ok, let's go. Casliber (talk · contribs) 15:42, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
found in the coastal waters of the western Atlantic Ocean from the North Sea to South Africa- sounds like it refers to the family and not the ray as written. Maybe add "that is" in between two clauses for flow.- Added.
- Aargh - trying to read through it, actually I think that made it worse - I think scans best without any comma at all and original wording. Anyway, all looks good.
- Added.
The paired electric organs of the marbled electric ray are capable of producing 70–80 volts of electricity.- I'd move this sentence to adjoin the other material on electricity in the lead. It looks odd being mentioned in two different bits- Moved.
In the Distribution and habitat section, when you say "northern UK" I presume it means "Scotland" (?) - I think if it is Scotland then saying so might be more accessible for readers.- Changed.
I'd link "physiological"- Done.
- I'd mention in the lead that it uses electricity for hunting
- The lead does mention it (?)
- ack. sorry, my bad, must have missed it first read through. Casliber (talk · contribs) 02:04, 14 May 2011 (UTC)
- The lead does mention it (?)
- I'd mention in the lead that it uses electricity for hunting
Otherwise looking pretty good. Casliber (talk · contribs) 23:08, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
- Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 01:51, 14 May 2011 (UTC)
1. Well written?:
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2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
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- Citations to reliable sources, where required:
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3. Broad in coverage?:
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4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
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5. Reasonably stable?
- No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):
6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
- Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
- Pass or Fail: Casliber (talk · contribs) 02:20, 14 May 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for reviewing. -- Yzx (talk) 02:26, 14 May 2011 (UTC)